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Weaver of tales. Loves to make things by word or by hand.
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Apr 13, 2025
The dramatic irony of Kenji falling to understand earth but also failing to see his own culture for what it is comes through great. Strong chapter.
To:farfriar42
Please forgive Otonashi. He's still in his emo era.
Feel free to imagine him in black eyeliner. 😂
To:Japanese🌹Rose
I'm excited to hear your reaction when Shiori learns her true name. It'll be toward the very end of the book. Hopefully the reveal is fun.
Apr 12, 2025
Oh, we've certaonly got more to learn about Otonashi's struggles. I hope the reveals and twists are fun to read!
I would love that, but right now I'd settle for changing to daily updates instead of every weekday. One can hope!
I feel like I'm cheating with a character like Tsubame. She's so fun to write.
Some days I think I'm not enough like Tsubame, other days I know I'm too much like her. Lol.
Wait, it's not Japanese Rose? I feel so deceived! Lol.
Sadly the future magic lessons will all be through hard trouble, but hopefully it is exciting.
Plenty more to come on that front. Of only Shiori would read ahead to figure things out!
Apr 10, 2025
I love your comments. Hopefully the reveals and action keeps you interested. More to come.
The real question is, just how special is Shiori? I hope the answers are worth the wait! Do let me know.
Apr 09, 2025
Energetic characters that are easy to understand. I always worry about making new character quickly understood and you managed great.
Excellent POV switching between the characters. I was never confused despite the rapid switches and it kept things engaging.
Apr 08, 2025
Some more similarities to the book I'm writing.
The two characters are a good pair.
This has a fun pulp melodrama feel. I'm looking forward to how the romance portion fits with that style.
I didn't like the Commander and thought he was embodying exactly what he criticized in humans. The ending really made that fit.
I can never tell when I'm being too obvious or subtle for jokes like that.
I'm looking forward to your reactions as the book progresses. It'll be part answers and questions, then all answers and action as thing move forward. Happy reading!