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Weaver of tales. Loves to make things by word or by hand.

registered at: Mar 16, 2025

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May 06, 2025

The reveal on her background was smooth and added to the story nicely. Ariel's awkwardness and feeling are easy to identify with and follow.

Foreshadowing the brother and incident with the backpack being reprised work well!

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:4

May 06, 2025

To:reinaaa

Princesses in Nyx are really strong, apparently, but could something more be going on? 🤔

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:13

May 06, 2025

Heavy topics and a feeling that everything is coming together. Their relationship has turned a corner and it feels like a bunch of action is waiting on the next page.

Mission: Love

Chapter:24

May 05, 2025

She's got her own pet elf warrior!

Loved the scene that basically went:

Him: *Confusing foreign language*
Her: eh?
Him: *kiss*
Her: Eh!?
Him: Oh, wait, you're a girl?
Her: EEEHHHH??!!!

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:3

May 05, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

I'm glad those questions come up and hope they don't make the book frustrating. There will be answers and hopefully the journey to those answers is fun to read!

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:3

May 05, 2025

To:reinaaa

Plenty of big stuff coming up. I hope you really enjoy it! 👍

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:12

May 05, 2025

A lot of big topics covered here, and tension in their relationship.

Feels like a lot of big Act 3 dynamic action coming up.

Mission: Love

Chapter:23

May 05, 2025

I've gotna sinking feeling that Kenji is going to be the one caught in this trap.

Great action as things move forward.

Mission: Love

Chapter:22

May 05, 2025

To:Japanese🌹Rose

Thanks. I've appreciated your support and feedback throughout writing the book. I'll be catching up on Mission: Love soon. It's been doing so well.

I hope it was at least an interesting puzzle to see how Shiori used wag few tools she had to fight back.

The next chapter is a doozy!

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:36

May 05, 2025

To:Japanese🌹Rose

The Duke is certainly a stetson villain. I made faces actually writing some of his dialog. I was also very happy to write the part where he gets what is coming to him.

I really worried over those changes. I had a few readers outside of Honeyfeed.fm who liked the name change. At the same time, your feedback had been important to me throughout writing this book. It struggled with it and I'm still not entirely sure.

Forgive me!

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:35

May 03, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

If it were that simple, poor Shiori would likely have an easier time throughout Act 2! 😅

Sadly I'm not that nice to my characters. Do let me know if something about my writing interrupts your interest or doesn't make sense. I really appreciate the feedback.

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:2

May 02, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

I hope you enjoy it! I've enjoyed the first couple chapters of your and hope to find more time this weekend.

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:1

May 02, 2025

Jade and Emerald are interesting gemstone names.

What is their tech level? They have cannons? (Cannon fodder)

Jade is an interesting pair for Ariel.

Were both writing other-word stories. I'm interested to see where this goes.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:2

May 02, 2025

Instant conflict and a dislikable character in Janice. The questions raised by her home life (Brother? Military? No parents?) does as much to pull me to the next chapter as meeting the "boy who went thud". Great start.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:1

May 02, 2025

Nice build up with the characters and it's good to get the promise of music from earlier. This feels like "the calm before the storm."

Mission: Love

Chapter:21

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