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Weaver of tales. Loves to make things by word or by hand.
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Apr 20, 2025
I wish my kid would eat so excitedly.
Their making up works as a great foundation and feels natural.
This makes me wonder how the Force interacts with such a rare and volatile thing as "feelings".
I've just finished up writing Chapter 30 that will release next week. I think you'll enjoy reading what comes next. Please do let me know if it doesn't delight! 🫣
Apr 19, 2025
I actually thought in the first few paragraphs "it would be interesting if someone reprise the 'wnchant and drown' type of mermaid".
And then you went and mentioned it. Very fun to have her voice be actually magical!
Apr 18, 2025
To:farfriar42
I'm a sicker for pathos in a story where people expose painfully honest moments. I think we can all empathize with Tsubame here a bit.
New trouble to shake things up. Excited for the next chapter.
A quick, foolish mistake. Hopefully it doesn't ruin your enjoyment in reading, but it does set us up for great stuff in the coming chapters.
Hopefully I'll be able to build Motohara more in the coming chapters, and fix things between Shiori and Symphon. We'll see if I'm up to the challenge as the book gets to the climax.
Feedback like this helps me know where the reader is and I really appreciate it.
Apr 17, 2025
A lot more to come. I've been getting behind on my writing goals but I'll easily keep up the one-chapter-per-weekday schedule. I'm excited to k ow what you think as it progresses!
Apr 16, 2025
The new character both highlights Kenji's progress and adds a sense of time pressure. Makes me interested in what comes next.
I'm not sure that either Shiori or Otonasho considered it a date, but who said their opinions mattered?
Tsubame has spoken!
Apr 15, 2025
"Men are from Mars women are from Venus", except this dude is from Planet X.
Profound discussions coming out of mundane stories is my favorite way to present a theme. Both characters remaining distinct and understandable in such a heated discussion is not easy to pull off like this. Great.
Quite a few similarities between our books, with a high school romance split between worlds and cultures. I enjoy your approach.
Some of these scenes take me back to my years in Japan. It feels like they're in one of the more rural or mountainous areas. I only wish I had access to the Force when learning medical Japanese; it would have been easier!
Thanks for the clear and useful feedback.
We're only halfway through a 36-40 chapter novel and the roughest stuff is about to come.
I love writing these characters, but I'm about to put them through some difficult stuff! 🫣
To:Japanese🌹Rose
Oh, plenty more surprises to come for our heroine. I wonder if this has anything to do with her true name? 😈
I've never felt very good at writing suspense. Hopefully you feel like the cliffhanger delivers an interesting scene in the next chapter. I appreciate your feedback.