Oct 14, 2025
Awwww, so sweet! He finally spoke! He's so cute! I wonder what stopped him from speaking before though? Was there a spell broken by her love? Or was he just shy? 
Anyway, I really liked this story! ❤️❤️❤️
I know this was for the short challenge for the month, and you did great for that, but I would really like it if you rewrite this as a proper, longer novel (even if it's short), in which you include the background, history, etc and their feelings develop a little more gradually, plus a couple more threats and deleflections, maybe trouble and jealousy at school, etc. The story would get to flow more smoothly without abruptly going forward, and it would be a masterpiece! Even as is, it's a 9/10 for me! ❤️ Loved it! It was a pleasure reading!