Sep 29, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thank you, thank you, my friend! 💗🥰

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 29, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

One last chapter which I'm writing right now! 💓

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 29, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

He is, LOL! 😆

The Fallen Garden realm was briefly mentioned in a previous chapter, remember? 32, I think? Not Eden, but formed with parts of it.

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 29, 2025

To:Literate_Manul

Thank you for reading!🙇‍♀️

Glad you're enjoying! 🥰

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Sep 29, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

That's crazy, are you sure?! 😱It would be awfully unfair, considering everything on this site is in PT, and they didn't mention otherwise on the main page. I can't help but wonder if they were mistaken, but I'm going to try and hurry by that time just in case...
Thanks, friend 💗

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 29, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Hehe, I know, right?! T_T
But I have a plan! You'll see! 💓

Thanks for the heads-up! But wait! – EST?! Doesn't this website run on Pacific Time? The rankings – and the previous contest – were always in Pacific Time! I've been assuming that the deadline is 11:59 on 29th September, Pacific Time! Please tell me that it was just a typo, or then show me where the ET part was written😭

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 29, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Sounds fun if you ever feel like writing it hehe😆

Had a quick look, nice edit.

I meant Celeste and Hinata; for some reason, I didn't like the former, and the latter went from secretary to friend without any explanation. That was my personal opinion, you don't have to change anything. 😉 (maybe I was too distracted by the boys LOL)

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 29, 2025

Nice start! 🤭
Is this story going to be focused more on romance or slice-of-life/drama etc?
Also, love your sister's cover art, and your profile pic!

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Sep 28, 2025

Thank you for a lovely comment! 🥰💓

I want strawberry cake too T_T

Hehe, it was fun writing that scene!

I'm glad you're enjoying, thanks for the encouragement!

Poor Lucien! But don't lose hope – just like he doesn't 🥰

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 28, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

I know right?! 😆

Yay, some love for poor Azel 😇💕

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 28, 2025

Oh my gosh, so sweet! I love this! 🥹💗

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Sep 28, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Seriously, there's just 3 to 4 more. 😅 Hehe. I wanted to keep that casual feel until the end while the climax quietly unfolds in the background.💗
Back to writing! ✍️

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 28, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Oh, wow! Okay, thanks! In that case, I'm going to read uptil Chapter 12, and then I'll go and check out Chapter 576 (how do you keep count by the way LOL!😅)
Cheers! ✨️

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 28, 2025

Awwwww, I'm glad she ended up with him, but it's kinda bittersweet not getting to go back💦. Maybe in a sequel? But she has chosen him, so it would be wrong I guess, since they're all interested and that would make a harem ending. So this is it I guess. 💗

I had so much fun with this! I love your romances! Way to go and congratulations on finishing! 🥰💗🎉

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Sep 27, 2025

Yuto calling him a lunatic made me laugh hahahaha🤣 He's so done with him but he knows Rika likes him so he's like, okay...💗
So sweet! Also, Kael – I mean Souta is so adorable and chaotic 🤭

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1