May 08, 2025

Wait! you can’t end it like that. it was one of the most beautiful chapters of the story. I really loved the part about Love was not about control but seeing someone for who they are and staying anyways. I know that was not a direct quote, but it definitely stuck with me. thanks for sharing this story.

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May 08, 2025

We all knew this would happen sooner or later. They were lucky it was June who saw them. Sera is lucky to have June as a friend. I loved the interaction in this chapter. it was good to see June get more time

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May 07, 2025

Finally the true kiss. What a great chapter.

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May 07, 2025

Another good chapter. I like how you write the interactions between the group of friends. That kind of atmosphere is hard to write and keep natural. you do it well.

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May 07, 2025

And there she goes again. This was another well written chapter. Growth doesn’t happen overnight. She went quickly from accepting that she wasn’t alone to spiraling downward in the bath. This is the truth. She is lucky to have an uncle that is so understanding. He may not truly understand what Miyami is going through, but he cares. She is lucky to have him.

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May 07, 2025

What an awkward moment for Hinoko. You captured that feeling perfectly. Who knew that Miyami had it in her to be so brave.

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May 07, 2025

Scary moments. But I am proud of the growth I am seeing in the characters. I hope our stalker doesn’t cause to much harm on them.

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May 07, 2025

I am enjoying following the growth of Yaso.

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May 07, 2025

Thank you for the story. Our two lovers need more credit for swaying the leaders to seek peace. ☮️

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May 07, 2025

Love truly does conquer all.

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May 07, 2025

well that is the way things go. How are our heroes going to stop a crazy general and leaders of both side who only want war.

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May 07, 2025

Busted!!!! Yhis was a sweet romantic chapter. You captured the awkwardness of a two people who found themselves in that situation for the first time.

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May 07, 2025

Even Dostoevsky wrote that people can find pleasure in a toothache. otherwise there is no reason to mine with pain. I like that you began the chapter with that recognition because it sets the tone for the rest of tha chapter. As for the end, I can only say ”Wow!”

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May 07, 2025

To:lolitroy

She is trying to move on after finding out she can’t go back.

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May 06, 2025

I really like how you can capture the intimacy and tenderness, but are still able to show the nervousness. It makes the scene feel real.

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