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Aug 03, 2025

I am enjoying the story. I can relate to Haru. I remember what it was like my first day teaching. It can be difficult until you build a relationship. The only criticism I have is the formatting. The paragraph separations disappeared when you pasted them in. It happens sometimes 😀

Love Lesson After School

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

No! please don’t be dead. I agree with Mara, a great chapter. You have me wrapped around your finger, wanting more. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:15

Aug 03, 2025

I am sorry for being late in reading this. I am enjoying reading this. The action is well written. You have me routing for the characters. The cliffhanger endings and surprises keep me wanting more.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:14

Aug 03, 2025

I am wondering if Bo-lo-to and his followers are as powerful as he thinks. Or is he fullhardy. The fact that one of his followers is uncertain of their strength makes me wonder.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:23

Aug 03, 2025

Magic? This world is interesting. I am curious about this world beyond the castle.

Brown Sugar Cinderella

Chapter:10

Aug 03, 2025

Another good chapter. I especially liked the description of him trying to communicate with the maid/nanny. Your narration style reminds me of Edgar Rice Burroughs.

Brown Sugar Cinderella

Chapter:9

Aug 03, 2025

To:PriestNii

Thank you very much. I start my stories with characters, and then put them in a situation. the story becomes theirs. my outline branches from there. I am not aware of the game you mentioned. O’Neill check it out.

The Last Revision

Chapter:8

Aug 03, 2025

About that…

Dominion Protocol Volume 11: The Memory Conspiracy

Chapter:22

Aug 03, 2025

OK. I can accept that ending. Thank you for not ending it earlier. This was a clever story, and I am glad that I read it.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:40

Aug 03, 2025

I don’t what is worse. not remembering or remembering.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:38

Aug 03, 2025

You did it again. You made me cry. Definitely not what I was hoping for.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:37

Aug 03, 2025

It is good that his mom is apologetic, but that doesn’t make everything ok. His dad is a real piece. Ivhope he is not based on someone real. I also hope the memories come back.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:36

Aug 03, 2025

I am biting my finger nails. I am glad the Bo-lo-to does not know about her yet.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:22

Aug 03, 2025

you were able to make this short chapter intense. Bo-lo-to is more powerful than I thought. I am glad that they split the party. I think that will be key later.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:21

Aug 02, 2025

Sorry, but the amnesia makes me sad and angry. she doesn’t deserve that. I am just thinking out loud, but I hope it doesn’t end this way. My heart is hoping for a happy ending.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:35

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