Aug 01, 2020
Wow... The whole story felt like an emotional roller coaster. The build-up to the Battle of Bands was pretty exciting and the way the characters were fleshed out was really good. I supported Minato from the beginning and Junya's character was a bit confusing to me in the beginning but that cleared up as his real feelings towards Mano were revealed.
Overall, I would say this was definitely a good read though you can edit the human errors later on. The plot was captivating and the ending was quite satisfying. The musical metaphors you used were pleasant to read and left me with a mushy feeling. I was especially enraptured by the, "Love is music without volume..." paragraph. I really felt that one.
Thanks for taking the time to write this, it really was a wonderful story!