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Hi guys, most of you know me as Shn. I'm a writer and a cosplayer.
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Feb 13, 2023
This was an interesting read. I believe you are missing a quotation mark after the dialogue about press conferences and interviews. I like how lighthearted the ending of the chapter is. I think I resonate with Sachiko 😂
Sep 06, 2022
To:AWiddleStar
I felt like it could be done more efficiently, I was bored at that moment 😅
To:Koyomi
It didn't. don't worry
Great chapter. It took me forever to realize that it will shift from third person to first person.😜
Interesting chapter.
This is a way better chapter, and I really enjoyed it! I love the cliffhanger.
Very dystopian. Even though the prose is slightly unusual, it evoked emotions within me, and that's what art is about.
It was a good chapter, but Chiffon's thoughts in the beginning felt like purple prose.
I had fun reading this chapter. I enjoyed the romance, as well as how ridiculous Dezechiel is 😂 The story kinda reminds me of RPG sometimes.
Poor Chiffon, she has to put up with finding someone strong for her. I really like your descriptions
Sep 01, 2022
Interesting. I love how the title is a combination of both their names! It was fun reading the first chapter.
This is an interesting prologue! It was really easy to read too, and I got a grasp of what was going on. Can't wait to read more.
Jul 17, 2022
This is too straight, and it's kinda awkward for me to read 😅😅
This is a great romcom premise. Keep up the good work.
Jun 07, 2022
I love your action descriptions!
