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Hi guys, most of you know me as Shn. I started writing novellas around 10 years ago. Before that, I had written short stories that were published in the local newspaper.
Other than that, I'm a university lecturer and a cosplayer.
Mar 21, 2026
I can feel the pain of the MC. That being said, I found numerous typos.
Nov 27, 2025
Good opening and I hope I can read more. I certainly want to. 😃
Oct 25, 2025
Nicely written and the MC is relatable~
Oct 16, 2025
Wonderfully written. The images are crisp in my mind.
Feb 13, 2023
This was an interesting read. I believe you are missing a quotation mark after the dialogue about press conferences and interviews. I like how lighthearted the ending of the chapter is. I think I resonate with Sachiko 😂
Sep 06, 2022
To:AWiddleStar
I felt like it could be done more efficiently, I was bored at that moment 😅
To:Koyomi
It didn't. don't worry
Great chapter. It took me forever to realize that it will shift from third person to first person.😜
Interesting chapter.
This is a way better chapter, and I really enjoyed it! I love the cliffhanger.
Very dystopian. Even though the prose is slightly unusual, it evoked emotions within me, and that's what art is about.
It was a good chapter, but Chiffon's thoughts in the beginning felt like purple prose.
I had fun reading this chapter. I enjoyed the romance, as well as how ridiculous Dezechiel is 😂 The story kinda reminds me of RPG sometimes.
Poor Chiffon, she has to put up with finding someone strong for her. I really like your descriptions
Sep 01, 2022
Interesting. I love how the title is a combination of both their names! It was fun reading the first chapter.