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Aug 26, 2025

To:kazesenken

Sounds good!🔥💖

Time and Time Again

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2025

I like this one too, its a fairly simple isekai format but theres nothing wrong with excuting that nicely as done here🔥

The one thing I would say is it feels very distance when he wakes up on this side. I get the impression thats sort of intenti9nal tbf, it gives a kind of breezy narrated montage of usual first 10 mimutes of isekai we've all already seen numerous times and a lightly airy almost ominous sense to the timepuase stuff💯 - but I think even one line of his thoughts or a sentance spoken aloud to himself would be good - just to make him feel that bit more active/alive in the scene.

Overall though he seems very suitably relatable of a character to alot of us reading as should be the case😎😆👍

Time and Time Again

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2025

Time + Bead = burst of shotgun pellets is very fun and creative magic.

Gideon has a fun personality, its peppy, cocoksure even, it really makes him come alive right from the off - Really engaging opening with a lot of threads to be intruiged by👀

Time and Time Again

Chapter:1

Aug 25, 2025

The forgetting his memories of the game is obviously in the title and pretty neat by itself, but him being on a super hardcore difficult is really fun to see; I can see alot of struggle ahead🔥😎.

Nice cover art btw🙌❤️

Reincarnated into My Favorite Game, But I Forgot Everything I Knew About It

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2025

To:obliviousbushtit

Real life reference material?! Thats very kwl👀🙌. I hope it was fun and not just grey😆😎

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:7

Aug 25, 2025

Intruiging start, silently malious seeming angel adds a nice mystery as to whats going on exactly👀

Reincarnated into My Favorite Game, But I Forgot Everything I Knew About It

Chapter:1

Aug 25, 2025

Hmmmmm, I presume the idea here is to give us some pov of a slave to sorta emphatise more closely with them and I can appreicate that👍.

However I will say, this is now 3 Povs back to back, and the set up in chapter 1 you'd sort of expect to see countinue in chapter 2. I guess theres alot going on in these first 4 uploads. Lotta good worldbuilding and very intruging premise😎, but perhaps a bit too much going on and too many character PoVs in quick succession for my tastes🙏.

The Hero Must be Killed

Chapter:4

Aug 25, 2025

Another letter so soon! Honestly I think it might be nice to space them out a bit, I feel kinda yoinked out of the previous scene😆.

That said, the worldbuilding here is very nice, all sorts of good tidbits. I really appreicate that this is a fantasy persons PoV too, you don't have her be an odd duck who also hates slavery, instead she just sees it as a normal part of culture and I rather respect that choice🔥💖

Also, dunno if I said, but really nice cover art for the novel❤️

The Hero Must be Killed

Chapter:3

Aug 25, 2025

Hmmmm, I think again my main thought is concisness, lot of words spent per topic and yet without describing much of the mansion or even characters present.

That aside, a slave! Considering the mention about the hero not understanding slavery last chapter too, excited to see where this headed😎

The Hero Must be Killed

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2025

Very fun premise! Opening on a letter is nice, it has more 1800 lit vibes even, which matches kind of nicely to set the tone.
The post story premise of a hero with nothing to do is great - I espiaclly like her mention of how Tanaka thinking her new role is a promotion fruastrates her inside.

I will say you could be a fair bit more concise, some lines repeat pretty much the same information earlier lines already did - and likewise the tenses of words are off in a few places, but thats all just polishing stuff for later drafts as they say🙌👍.

Overall very intruging opening🔥

The Hero Must be Killed

Chapter:1

Aug 25, 2025

Eyo really nice. I like how he's effectively made aquaintence with both the dragon and cobald. Last couple chapters were a little slower and more world focused too which I think is great - and some bonding with our Daisy.

Omnious ending about what to come as well. I quite enjoyed reading all that💖👍🔥

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:8

Aug 25, 2025

I quite like how enamoured he is with the nature and countryside, really sells his contrast with the tokyo city life he had❤️

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:7

Aug 25, 2025

To:kazesenken

Some adults take a while to mature🤣🤣

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:4

Aug 25, 2025

I approve of talking Griffon🔥

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:5

Aug 25, 2025

Good little move and incoperation of his past life, neat stuff😎.

I will say I hope we get a moment for the story to breathe soon😆, lotta back to back events so hopefully he can take stock a bit more calmly soon🙏

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:4

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