Aug 25, 2025
I like this one too, its a fairly simple isekai format but theres nothing wrong with excuting that nicely as done here🔥
The one thing I would say is it feels very distance when he wakes up on this side. I get the impression thats sort of intenti9nal tbf, it gives a kind of breezy narrated montage of usual first 10 mimutes of isekai we've all already seen numerous times and a lightly airy almost ominous sense to the timepuase stuff💯 - but I think even one line of his thoughts or a sentance spoken aloud to himself would be good - just to make him feel that bit more active/alive in the scene.
Overall though he seems very suitably relatable of a character to alot of us reading as should be the case😎😆👍