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I'm only here to support some friends. But, farq it, I'll write some junk while I'm at it.
What is an Achievement?
Aug 17, 2025
Sounds good. I've done this myself. Looking forward to the upgrades.
Aug 16, 2025
Okay. I think I got the continuity and consistency issues sorted out with this chapter. I hope.
To:Nato_otan1
Thank you very much. Sorry, just saw the comment now. Really appreciate it. ❤️
The 2nd person voice shifts to 1st person voice midway.
This use of 2nd person voice is pretty cool. Good read so far.
Aug 14, 2025
lol, that Duna guy
Aug 13, 2025
Clint's like the twin's catalyst to their growth arc for sure.
Clint was badass in this one
I kinda get the feeling Clint is toughening up the twin's attitudes 😅
Aug 12, 2025
These troublesome NPCs making creator working hard to aid them😅
Story gives me Gulliver's Travels vibes for some reason. Imo, tho I know nothing about isekai, this is solid.
Getting solid high-concept isekai vibes. Nice flow.
Good start.
Changed Tamu to Arnum. As I just stumbled upon an actual Tamu online store, lol. Fixed that up.😅
Agree with Gurg, finish this story so it can have a solid shot at the contest. This high-concept isekai could be what the sponsors are after.
