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I'm only here to support some friends. But, farq it, I'll write some junk while I'm at it.
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Sep 22, 2025
To:peanutspersonally
Kairo pack hand-warmer is fully cooked on this chapter.
I've altered Kairo's persona in this chapter to make him more proactive. As per my beta readers advice.
Glad Sol survived. Phew, for a moment I thought it was lights out for him. Good stuff Banje. You did a good story. Good luck for the contest. Can just imagine Clint slipping away to drift off into the sunset.
That's the Clint... Eastwood moment of "you did good kid" and "I'll take care of it from here." Can't get any manlier.
Ogre is immortal, meanwhile Sol is....😔
Wait. Sol is.... 🫥
will Luna do the deed and off her bro at the same time I wonder 😱
I guess it's cool at some point Sol was enjoying magic. Tho somehow for some reason I was picturing Yoichi Isagi going in for a score with Sol at that moment. 😅
Jump to death, test of true immortality 😅
Not sure why, but Shion's situation kinda gibs me Fruits Basket vibes, but instead of zodiac animals, she's surrounded by gods.
My boi Ado!!! LETSGO. Great stuff.
😍Dodo eyes those pecs... Nokia eyes his aura counter going for a high score. Love it how he scores high aura by answer no to the gf question. 😆
Takeshi gibs me the reluctant hero vibes. Good stuff.
I like the liveliness of your characters. The flow is good.