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I'm only here to support some friends. But, farq it, I'll write some junk while I'm at it.

registered at: Jul 02, 2025

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Oct 21, 2025

For a moment I thought the goddess was gonna make him the gun. 😆

Reincarnated as the Gun Hero in Another World Volume 1

Chapter:0

Oct 21, 2025

Socks do come in handy from time to time.

WHY A TALISMAN?

Chapter:0

Oct 19, 2025

The voice shifted from 1st (I think) to 3rd. The previous chapter being a prologue and different time period, it's fine. And I do like that you took risks with the prologue.

Summit Of Greed

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2025

To:Ivory-of-Phosphoros

Not his 'skin' but his 'aura'. Different traits.

When I bought That Suspect Baroque Closet and Lamp, I Didn't Expect to Be a Mundane Wizard for the Demon Prince of Another World.

Chapter:4

Oct 13, 2025

Fufu how the tables turn. Yes, Guo was right, Xiao Yu was keeping her revenge tally.

I, a Hermaphrodite, Live by Taking Lives

Chapter:4

Oct 13, 2025

Nice happy ending. This story has a Disney, I guess, vibe. The times Janessa is with Cassius, there's a Frozen or Beauty and the Beast quality. Other times the tone makes me think of those YA high school romance novels with the bitch girls club like the protagonist fighting against the Heathers. It's strange for me to say, but even though this is a first person perspective, I keep thinking this is 3rd limited. Not sure why. I guess because it kinda moves like one at times. That's not a bad thing by the way, it just means that the identity of the protagonist is clear in all instances.

I guess the one constructive pointer I have, is that I didn't feel the stakes in the story even when Janessa was arrested. They're definitely there, no denying, and people are nice, bitchy, caring, energetic, angry... but, because I'm never quite sure of each character's core motivations, perhaps that's why the stakes don't sink home to me. Don't mind me, chalk this down to reader brain-drain. If anything, your story and mine are similar in tone and vibes, so it's probably why I'm seeing certain things in this narrative to reflect what others see in mine.

Overall, the story is very chic (I say it in a nice way). A different read for the contest. Congrats on making it through to the end.

A Royal Resurrection

Chapter:30

Oct 13, 2025

to be the 3rd wheel of a couple, lol.

A Royal Resurrection

Chapter:16

Oct 13, 2025

Life is so cruel to women of those times, and to be resilient through it all. Respects.

I, a Hermaphrodite, Live by Taking Lives

Chapter:3

Oct 13, 2025

Good narrative so far. It feels very wuxia.

I, a Hermaphrodite, Live by Taking Lives

Chapter:2

Oct 12, 2025

To:peanutspersonally

I should say, any part that isn't the "flat" side of the stick is a foul. This is a link reference to the game if anyone is interested. [www.olympics.com/en/news/field-hockey-rules-how-to-play]
I used this for Kairo's combat sport, because it's related to a certain 'hidden' theme... and it's my sport. 😆

When I bought That Suspect Baroque Closet and Lamp, I Didn't Expect to Be a Mundane Wizard for the Demon Prince of Another World.

Chapter:11

Oct 12, 2025

To:peanutspersonally

Generally to hit the player and make a play with the round sided (or any side) of the stick is a foul. But Kairo's intention and the arena altered the rules to allow full contact.

When I bought That Suspect Baroque Closet and Lamp, I Didn't Expect to Be a Mundane Wizard for the Demon Prince of Another World.

Chapter:11

Oct 12, 2025

To:Ashfell

It's Field Hockey that's played with a hard ball, which is dribbled across a grass pitch. This sport has slight different rules to Ice Hockey, especially score zones and offside rules.

When I bought That Suspect Baroque Closet and Lamp, I Didn't Expect to Be a Mundane Wizard for the Demon Prince of Another World.

Chapter:11

Oct 12, 2025

To:Ashfell

Oh, I should've started off with "hockey stick". Thanks for calling that out. Obviously, I'll fix up post-contest should I ever get around to edits.

When I bought That Suspect Baroque Closet and Lamp, I Didn't Expect to Be a Mundane Wizard for the Demon Prince of Another World.

Chapter:11

Oct 12, 2025

To:kazesenken

Thanks for reading all the way through. Appreciate.

When I bought That Suspect Baroque Closet and Lamp, I Didn't Expect to Be a Mundane Wizard for the Demon Prince of Another World.

Chapter:70

Oct 11, 2025

To:kazesenken

I hope that's a good thing 😅 Tbh, Kairo making this decision was one of those "sounded good at the time" kind of decisions. His mother will scold him for it later on Earth.

When I bought That Suspect Baroque Closet and Lamp, I Didn't Expect to Be a Mundane Wizard for the Demon Prince of Another World.

Chapter:64

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