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I'm only here to support some friends. But, farq it, I'll write some junk while I'm at it.
Sorry, spam alerts are driving me crazy so I just follow novels directly.
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Oct 07, 2025
What a nice ending... Great stuff Nika. Just needs some polishing, but you have a solid gem here. For the contest timeframe, you did well.
Good stuff😊
Poor Berus. Why must protag suffer so much? 😭
Cozy moment
sensitive to her touch ey?😜
Berus do be the hero: that a boi.
"What kind of elf? Elf my bark." Berus takes off Mikkah's ears and shows them to Phorok. The pair sit smugly in palm of hands. "See these here? They're real."😆
I can just imagine this kind of Monty Pythons skit when Phorok was questioning on Mikkah's species.
The liveliness of your dialogue is good.
Ki-Rai brings out the liveliness of Berus.
The action just went high-octane and making our poor protag suffer, lol
Lot of action happening.
Oct 04, 2025
I'm not entirely sure what kind of ride I was: lots of directional pull. It was an interesting story to the end. Congrats on finishing it. Good luck.
Oct 02, 2025
This was his return desires? 🤔 Tbh, it wasn't intended for this purpose.
Sep 30, 2025
To:Moe Tie
Okay, I think I get you. I'll note feedback down for future drafts. For now, just consider this author half-baked-numpty lead up, due to brain cell shortage.
To:kazesenken
Aaaah... ye, pretty much 🙃But only gay for one man (at least on this planet)