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I'm only here to support some friends. But, farq it, I'll write some junk while I'm at it.
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Oct 09, 2025
To:Ashfell
He definitely causes some headaches that's for sure. Thanks heaps for checking out the novel.
I was crying cause of the child's pain and then the dao to op justice kicked in. Goddess count your days because they're numbered. Demon Lord gonna cook yah.😈
Well, isn't Veyra one vindictive xenophobe. But I wonder why she couldn't leave him be. He had done his summons contract. Since we've jumped in media res, it's prolly one of those preconditions that you do your job and go home.🤔 Great stuff so far.
I feel like I was in medias res of a Lord of the Rings battle. Good stuff.
To:kazesenken
Lol, pretty much.
Oct 07, 2025
What a nice ending... Great stuff Nika. Just needs some polishing, but you have a solid gem here. For the contest timeframe, you did well.
Good stuff😊
Poor Berus. Why must protag suffer so much? 😭
Cozy moment
sensitive to her touch ey?😜
Berus do be the hero: that a boi.
"What kind of elf? Elf my bark." Berus takes off Mikkah's ears and shows them to Phorok. The pair sit smugly in palm of hands. "See these here? They're real."😆
I can just imagine this kind of Monty Pythons skit when Phorok was questioning on Mikkah's species.
The liveliness of your dialogue is good.
Ki-Rai brings out the liveliness of Berus.
The action just went high-octane and making our poor protag suffer, lol