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I'm only here to support some friends. But, farq it, I'll write some junk while I'm at it.
Sorry, spam alerts are driving me crazy so I just follow novels directly.
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Jul 31, 2025
Cool bonding chapter. Like, Clint is still aloof, but can sense his "fish out of water" situation here. I feel, Sol and Luna are a good balance for his character.
Clint defo gives me the aloof cowboy protagonist vibes. Real contrast to fantasy isekai setting 😆
To:Moe Tie
TBH, he doesn't become too generic later on😂
Jul 29, 2025
The Boys' Love chapter. Only one.🙃
Jul 28, 2025
To:peanutspersonally
Hopefully, last update. This is a hard chapter to write, but hopefully with a bit of added context, it reads smoothly. Right... moving on.
Right. So did some edits, which hopefully will flow better. Gave some added fight to Lyt-guard. Still not sure if the action is clear enough. I'll review again later.
Ye, this is raw as at the moment. It'll go through edits later on. And my backspace and A keys broke. Typing out stuff is like banging on an stone age typewriter right now.
lol, yor my slaves not my democracy... 😂
Jul 27, 2025
Lol. If but a tad too lively😅
Jul 26, 2025
I don't think I gave a definition of these terms in the story, more or less using action to demonstrate what they are. But doesn't hurt to have a codex.
lol, go to the market for, like, meat and face being the dead meat 😅
Jul 25, 2025
lol, he got a fit assessment for his new life by the angel 😇
Like office gossip around the coffee machine
Jul 23, 2025
His trial is akin to Area 51 alien testing routines, or running some Men in Black customs checks to be sure of value and threat. 😆 Ye field hockey is cool.
So, here's where you probably want to break out the dialog into their own paragraphs. It makes it easier to follow the voices of individuals and their actions. This is purely for flow. Otherwise, the prose continues on the surreal style, which suits the story.