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I was once here for fun with some friends, but soon saw the rodeo had more of a good time.
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Aug 13, 2025
Clint's like the twin's catalyst to their growth arc for sure.
Clint was badass in this one
I kinda get the feeling Clint is toughening up the twin's attitudes 😅
Aug 12, 2025
These troublesome NPCs making creator working hard to aid them😅
Story gives me Gulliver's Travels vibes for some reason. Imo, tho I know nothing about isekai, this is solid.
Getting solid high-concept isekai vibes. Nice flow.
Good start.
Changed Tamu to Arnum. As I just stumbled upon an actual Tamu online store, lol. Fixed that up.😅
Agree with Gurg, finish this story so it can have a solid shot at the contest. This high-concept isekai could be what the sponsors are after.
Hmm, I sense some duo development here 😉
Aug 11, 2025
The novel has undergone refinements since Walker's feedback. I think I've addressed the weak points he suggested, while reinforcing the novel's strengths. Aside from continuous proofreading, I think this story is good to go.
Elias seems like a nice person. The cats are cute.
Yanno, I think Ren should think twice before rushing out to save a damsel in distress, unless he doesn't mind his body holes. 😅
Good opening chapter. Read easy down the page. He did a deed not many would do, although it cost his life. Let's just hope his isekai is a nice reward.
Fun story so far Gurg. Keep it up.