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I'm only here to support some friends. But, farq it, I'll write some junk while I'm at it.
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Aug 16, 2025
To:Nato_otan1
Thank you very much. Sorry, just saw the comment now. Really appreciate it. ❤️
This use of 2nd person voice is pretty cool. Good read so far.
Aug 14, 2025
lol, that Duna guy
Aug 13, 2025
Clint's like the twin's catalyst to their growth arc for sure.
Clint was badass in this one
I kinda get the feeling Clint is toughening up the twin's attitudes 😅
Aug 12, 2025
These troublesome NPCs making creator working hard to aid them😅
Story gives me Gulliver's Travels vibes for some reason. Imo, tho I know nothing about isekai, this is solid.
Getting solid high-concept isekai vibes. Nice flow.
Good start.
Changed Tamu to Arnum. As I just stumbled upon an actual Tamu online store, lol. Fixed that up.😅
Agree with Gurg, finish this story so it can have a solid shot at the contest. This high-concept isekai could be what the sponsors are after.
Hmm, I sense some duo development here 😉
Aug 11, 2025
The novel has undergone refinements since Walker's feedback. I think I've addressed the weak points he suggested, while reinforcing the novel's strengths. Aside from continuous proofreading, I think this story is good to go.
Elias seems like a nice person. The cats are cute.