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Erii

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A self-published author of "The Guardian of Hope."

Drafts available, up until Chapter 28~

Links below for the paperback and ebook~

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registered at: May 19, 2020

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Jul 30, 2020

I can tell you're really rolling with the story here. The dialogue flows more naturally and the overall presentation is solid. Even how you end a chapter is well thought out. I definitely can't wait to read the next chapters!

Will The Stars Remember My Name?

Chapter:3

Jul 30, 2020

My sentiment remains the same from the previous chapter. I noticed the writing style is less casual this time around. I have to say, I love the bait and switch at the end there. It's a simple and effective way of hooking someone to the next chapter!

Will The Stars Remember My Name?

Chapter:2

Jul 30, 2020

I actually got Bottom-tier Character Tomozaki vibes, so far from the character interactions. The pacing feels natural and gets straight to the point. And, it certainly has a charm to it. I find that the overall writing style may be somewhat casual for my preference.

However, I'll be reading more chapters to see how it lends to the story. But that's just my initial impression.

Will The Stars Remember My Name?

Chapter:1

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