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Aug 30, 2025

To:Mara

I appreciate the compliments!! I'll try my best to live up to your expectations!!!

Reflections

Chapter:9

Aug 30, 2025

To:Mara

Sorry if I made you cry... I'm glad I managed to convey the emotions. I hope you continue to read!!

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Chapter:9

Aug 18, 2025

Beautifully written chapter, I love your take on one of the dystopia theories. I could feel the weight of his boots on the metal and the emotion that was capitulated inside of his tears. Great work!!

Rebel Hearts in the Neon Bazaar

Chapter:0

Aug 13, 2025

To:Mara

I'm glad I could convey the emotions properly!! I hope you keep reading!!

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Chapter:8

Aug 13, 2025

To:oo-Suuki-oo

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope you like grammatical errors because there everywhere :)

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Chapter:1

Aug 06, 2025

Another great chapter!! I love the use of the word venom instead of bite It really paints a vivid image in the reader's head. Also loved the way you described the mask she puts on, cracking. Beautiful use of words. Keep it up!!

I Don’t Take Bull from Anyone, Not Even a Demon Lord

Chapter:2

Aug 06, 2025

Great Start!!!!!!!! The part "Weapons to big for their egos" was so good, it may be understated but they say that a weapon will tell you a lot about a person and i just loved that description. Keep at it!!!

I Don’t Take Bull from Anyone, Not Even a Demon Lord

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

I love how you set the bar of what he's used to so low. This allows for the story to build and then further increases the impact of the better things that I'm sure will happen. Keep up the great work!!!!

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

Nice prologue!! I like how you painted it in the beginning with the worry, and then left it on another problem just before the MC could properly solve the rest of the problems.

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:0

Aug 03, 2025

To:Mai

Well, as a name is a core aspect of the main theme of this novel, I deliberately hid the name of the MC. I hope you'll continue to read my novel!!! Thanks for your comments!

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Chapter:4

Aug 03, 2025

To:Mai

I'm glad you like it!!! I've had that quote figured out since I started, so I just had to find a place for it!!

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Chapter:3

Aug 03, 2025

To:Mai

I haven't seen JJBA just yet, but I'm glad my idea worked!! We often associate mirrors with a reminder of what we are, so I thought the metaphor would work well.

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Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2025

To:Mai

Thanks for the feedback!!! Glad you enjoyed it!!

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Chapter:1

Jul 30, 2025

Nice 3rd chapter!!! I think it would be beneficial to you if you wrote longer chapters to help keep parts of the novel together rather then spread apart.

Blood Moon Harem

Chapter:3

Jul 27, 2025

To:Spirit

At least you got something from my novel 😂

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Chapter:5

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