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Jul 30, 2025
Nice 3rd chapter!!! I think it would be beneficial to you if you wrote longer chapters to help keep parts of the novel together rather then spread apart.
Jul 27, 2025
To:Spirit
At least you got something from my novel 😂
Nice Second chapter!! Love the descriptions between him and the girl. Keep it up!!
Jul 26, 2025
To:Mara
I agree, both sides have their own strength and both options paint scars in which we much carry. I'm glad my novel allowed you to think this way!!!
Jul 25, 2025
To:maleena
Thank you for your kind words!!! I'll continue to try and keep that consistent throughout my chapters!
To:TotallyNotKasai
I ment that as a dig at myself rather then your use of words!! I appreciate your kind words and hope that you'll continue to read my story!
I'm glad you're liking it, not too sure if I'd say "profound" but I appreciate it!! I plan to have the gender expression become just one of the issues they need to face.
Thanks for your comment!! I'll try and continue to build it in a way that feels natural.
Thanks!!! I tried to do something different that was on theme so I went with it!!
Thanks for taking the time to read it, glad you enjoyed!!
To:DanielleHartova
Don't take their skipping to heart!! If they skip, then they are simply not worthy of your story. Keep writing in a way that makes you happy!!
Jul 24, 2025
I'm glad I could convey what beauty lies in sadness. Thanks for reading!!!
Jul 23, 2025
Great start to your story!! I like how vivid your descriptions are. They really allow for an image to be painted in the reader's head. Keep up the great work!!
Love the weight of the realisation that she had killed him. You can still tell that she is concerned with it, even if it may not be a direct problem in the moment, it sets the scene for something greater!! Love it!!
Great Start, Keep It Up! I look forward to how you continue to build a world where good and evil cannot be used but only chosen.