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Jul 22, 2025
To:Nato_otan1
Tell me about it!😂
Jul 21, 2025
Really great opening! You're creating a thick, ambiguous atmosphere right from the start. Keep us guessing!!!
Nicely constructed opening. I like the descriptions; they all seem to layer together to build one really distinct visual. Keep it up!!!
To:Ashley
Thanks for the kind words!! Whether or not you cry or smile is completely up to how you interpret the ambiguity of the world and the scenario that the MC finds themself in. Such is the beauty of storywriting.
Jul 20, 2025
Great Start to this story, Keep going!!!
Jul 19, 2025
To:haru
I will make it grow stronger with each passing chapter hehe
You and me both!!!
Great Start! I like the ambiguity that you've created throughout this first chapter!!
To:Mara
After all what is right and wrong but a reflection of our frame of reference
To:Spirit
Great question!!! Keep reading and maybe more will come to light....
Thanks For Reading it!!! Means a lot!
Jul 16, 2025
Thanks for the kind words; it means a lot!
Jul 15, 2025
Thanks for taking the time to read it !!! 😄