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Oct 02, 2025
To:Deleted User
Awwww thanks!! I'll check your's out too, I'm just hoping that we're both thinking of the same meaning of the word Yurei!
To:Mara
Glad you enjoyed it! The second chapter of this story should be out tomorrow so stay tuned!!
I'm glad that you enjoyed my first chapter!! I'll fix that typo that you spotted too!!! I look forward to seeing what you think of the next chapters!
Sep 28, 2025
Thanks for your comment!!!!! I hope you'll continue to read my works!
Sep 25, 2025
Aww glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the support. I will continue to write, this story will be finished!!
Sep 10, 2025
To:Steampocalypse
Thanks for reading this chapter and for your feedback. I'll take your feedback on board as I continue to write. While all the dialogue tags for me make sense, I'll try to write in future, taking into account others who haven't read it.
Once again, thank you for your time <3
Glad I managed to paint an image in your head!!!! I'll edit the grammar mistake to. I hope you continue to enjoy my story!
Sep 02, 2025
Really great first chapter!!! Its hard to describe but the way you write makes the story feel grounded and feasible if you get what I mean. I really liked how you paced the writing. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into it. Keep up the great work!!!!
Aug 30, 2025
I appreciate the compliments!! I'll try my best to live up to your expectations!!!
Sorry if I made you cry... I'm glad I managed to convey the emotions. I hope you continue to read!!
Aug 18, 2025
Beautifully written chapter, I love your take on one of the dystopia theories. I could feel the weight of his boots on the metal and the emotion that was capitulated inside of his tears. Great work!!
Aug 13, 2025
I'm glad I could convey the emotions properly!! I hope you keep reading!!
To:oo-Suuki-oo
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope you like grammatical errors because there everywhere :)
Aug 06, 2025
Another great chapter!! I love the use of the word venom instead of bite It really paints a vivid image in the reader's head. Also loved the way you described the mask she puts on, cracking. Beautiful use of words. Keep it up!!
Great Start!!!!!!!! The part "Weapons to big for their egos" was so good, it may be understated but they say that a weapon will tell you a lot about a person and i just loved that description. Keep at it!!!