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Aug 03, 2025
I love how you set the bar of what he's used to so low. This allows for the story to build and then further increases the impact of the better things that I'm sure will happen. Keep up the great work!!!!
Nice prologue!! I like how you painted it in the beginning with the worry, and then left it on another problem just before the MC could properly solve the rest of the problems.
To:Mai
Well, as a name is a core aspect of the main theme of this novel, I deliberately hid the name of the MC. I hope you'll continue to read my novel!!! Thanks for your comments!
I'm glad you like it!!! I've had that quote figured out since I started, so I just had to find a place for it!!
I haven't seen JJBA just yet, but I'm glad my idea worked!! We often associate mirrors with a reminder of what we are, so I thought the metaphor would work well.
Thanks for the feedback!!! Glad you enjoyed it!!
Jul 30, 2025
Nice 3rd chapter!!! I think it would be beneficial to you if you wrote longer chapters to help keep parts of the novel together rather then spread apart.
Jul 27, 2025
To:Spirit
At least you got something from my novel 😂
Nice Second chapter!! Love the descriptions between him and the girl. Keep it up!!
Jul 26, 2025
To:Mara
I agree, both sides have their own strength and both options paint scars in which we much carry. I'm glad my novel allowed you to think this way!!!
Jul 25, 2025
To:Deleted User
Thank you for your kind words!!! I'll continue to try and keep that consistent throughout my chapters!
To:TotallyNotKasai
I ment that as a dig at myself rather then your use of words!! I appreciate your kind words and hope that you'll continue to read my story!
I'm glad you're liking it, not too sure if I'd say "profound" but I appreciate it!! I plan to have the gender expression become just one of the issues they need to face.
Thanks for your comment!! I'll try and continue to build it in a way that feels natural.
Thanks!!! I tried to do something different that was on theme so I went with it!!