Sep 30, 2025
Yaaay! They actually made it to Earth! That just proves all of Lucien's efforts weren't in vain hehe.
Now, as much as I loved the glorious chaos of this chapt, I also felt like things got a bit cramped. There's just so much happening at once: Kuro's card game, the Assistant, the banshees, Azel… all of it while Lucien's playing La Campanella on the piano haha.
Tbh, I liked the conclusion, the final scene was really good, it just needs a little more breathing room so we can really digest each moment. (Maybe split it into two chapters or just expand this one a bit.)
That said, you still managed to finish it on time! Congrats on wrapping it up. I'm happy you pulled it off, but also a little sad it's over. I wanted to see more of their wild adventures in Hell, and more of the side characters too. Please, author, I'm begging you for some extra chapters in the future; Kuro in Egypt, Lucien's past… I'd love to read those.
Once again, congrats on the conclusion and good luck in the contest!