Nov 20, 2025
Ok! This chapter was totally wild in a bunch of ways, but I really liked how you handled it. The MC's voice is kinda crazy lol, and now I'm curious about what's actually going on. Did the whole world shift, or was he just straight-up hallucinating? Good stuff.
Ah, btw, at the end, I think adding a few paragraph breaks would help so everything doesn't look too packed together. Other than that, solid chapter, gj.