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Oct 06, 2025

Does this magic system make sense? It does to me but that's because I'm the one who made it up. I sort of drew inspiration from a lot of things when making it and mashed several things together. You can try to guess what my inspirations were if you want.
I feel like I should have given a more clear description at some point.
Well, at this point in the story, no one has a clear picture of the entire thing so as long as you get the gist of it you should be fine.
Pax will explain a little bit next chapter so look forward to that.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:32

Oct 03, 2025

Yup, unsubtle foreshadowing in the title.
But what really is the end?
Who decides it?
Me, I have the answers but I won't tell you.
beginning of the end of beginnings

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:31

Sep 27, 2025

Cancer is pretty fucked up. I plan on bringing up Pax's first life every now and then like this when I feel like it. But, currently, I have no plans on directly stating Pax's 13th reason.
It's not that it's not relevant but that I feel like there is more value in not depicting it than depicting it.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:30

Sep 24, 2025

It's been... too long since my last update. I could give a thousand excuses why but it doesn't matter in the end. I'll try to be more consistent in the future.
What is love? What is purpose? Why is Pax the way that he is?
All very important questions... stay tubular my dudes.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:29

Sep 16, 2025

oof, deadline approaching rapidly. hope is not lost though.
In other news, I noticed Adam is kind of dumb. He is only a child after all, so don't be too mean to him. Maybe acting as a child for so long made him lose some intelligence. He certainly hasn't matured much since his past life.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:28

Sep 11, 2025

I think I'm just going to go out and say it. Isekai is probably my favorite genre. I just love all the slop. Feed me more sloppy slop. nom nom nomn. But sometimes the Isekai is peak and then I'm like oooh das somee gooo' slop. Mushoku Tensei is definetly problamatic but for some reason I rlly like it. erectile dysfuntion arc goes crazy. so relatable that guy. Somehow its flawed in such a perfect way. but maybe thats just my sophistry because maybe there really is no reason for why I like a specific thing over another.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:27

Sep 10, 2025

It's been a while since I posted a chapter. I got distracted... reading LOTM. Also this semester of Uni is tougher than I had imagined. I'd say there's below a 50% chance I get to 50k words before the competition deadline. But I'm also not sure if I can finish part one of the story in 15k words.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:26

Aug 29, 2025

Fate is a good way to make plot things happen. It was fate that your wife is cheating on you! It was fate that you ended up spilling that coffee all over yourself! You just weren't meant to drink it today!
Why don't people blame more things on fate in both fiction and reality?

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:25

Aug 27, 2025

This chapter happens entirely in Pax's head. I've wanted to make a chapter like this for a while now. I think Pax is always thinking in circles like this in his head.
What a goofy lil' guy.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:24

Aug 26, 2025

Looks like Adam learned from his mistake last time and only blew up his hand. He practiced it a couple of times when he was adventuring with Raya on the way to Celestia but she always disapproved of blowing yourself up as a means of fighting.
There is no strength without sacrifice.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:23

Aug 25, 2025

...
Not sure what to write this time. I know millions of people look forward to my comments but I've run out of ideas...
I started writing comments on my own chapters because I thought it would be kinda fun to foreshadow stuff or talk about some of my decisions. It would feel wrong to post a chapter without a comment now.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:22

Aug 22, 2025

New setting coming soon. I'm hyped. you should be too. The relationship between Raya and Adam is kinda strange right now. Do either of them know what they're doing?

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:21

Aug 21, 2025

To:BOG

I changed it to the more intense version. If anyone wants to see the old version, lmk.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:1

Aug 21, 2025

This marks the end of arc 2. A lot happened this chapter. Good chapter. Solid chapter.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:19

Aug 19, 2025

Changed the cover. Not completely sure that it's better than the old one. Though I like that it's more colorful. I don't plan on making a new one at least until cycle 3.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:18

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