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Aug 16, 2025

Doesn't really seem like Pax is too interested in becoming an adventurer. Honestly, I'm kinda sleepy myself. Writing is hard you know?
ten billion likes and I'll make the three dumbasses the main antagonists of the story

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:16

Aug 15, 2025

I updated chapter 1 back to it's original version. I toned it down originally when I posted it on this site because it had a very graphic suicide and I was worried that because it has to be rated for "All Audiences" it might cause some issues with the competition. I realized that it doesn't matter because I won't be winning.
I shalt not censor mineself hereafter.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:15

Aug 14, 2025

A rather exposition heavy chapter. I hope the worldbuilding is at least somewhat interesting to you. No single person knows the full truth, that is the importance of perspective.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:14

Aug 12, 2025

This chapter ended up being the longest yet somehow... If you were wondering why Pax was aiming only for Raya's abdomen the whole fight, it's because he's too short to punch her face with much force. Also, if Raya had been using Ryuzu's Fang from the beginning, she would have flattened Pax so don't assume she's at all weak.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:13

Aug 11, 2025

...New dinkus. kind of a funny word when you think about it...dinkus. 4 likes and I'll change the ...dinkuses... of the previous chapters. I'll also be making a new cover somewhat soon.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:12

Aug 08, 2025

Locked back in. Can't stop. Won't stop. I'm hyped. You better get hyped. Pax... probably won't be getting more hyped by what's to come though.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:11

Aug 03, 2025

If you didn't notice, the new perspective at the end was not accurate. Next chapter will be all about perspectives. Man, I just love perspective. I hope you like perspective too.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:9

Aug 02, 2025

2 chapters in one day! That's not really that crazy of an accomplishment though because this chapter was already pretty much done a while ago... I also updated the synopsis again. I'm not sure how to write a synopsis well without spoiling the story, so I went a little bit more cryptic this time. If you knew the ending of the story you'd be like "woah that's crazy!" but I feel like now it's just making people go "huh?"

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:8

Aug 02, 2025

So the "perspective chapters" go in chronological order. Obviously it's counted from when they start, not when they end. There would have to be some crazy time shenanigans to make the perspective with Pax's dad come after the burning of the Witherton estate otherwise.
I promise there is only a little bit of time shenanigans going on in this story.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:7

Jul 31, 2025

Next chapter marks the end of Arc 1. Maybe this is too short to be really called an "arc". If you want, you could combine this arc and the next one, and call it the "Introductory Arc".
You could also just consider the first three arcs as just a prologue to the rest of the story.
It doesn't really matter in the end I guess.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:6

Jul 30, 2025

I feel like not enough Isekai ever address the fact that the protagonist is now dead in their old world. That must mean my story is revolutionary.
If I were ever going to write another story after this one, it would take place in Pax's original world.
Just because Pax had never heard of magic there, doesn't mean it didn't exist.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:5

Jul 29, 2025

Sorry that the chapter is a little later than usual. Somehow this chapter ended up being about twice as long. If this comment gets 10 billion likes I'll bring back the three Idiots and make them the main antagonists of the story.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:4

Jul 28, 2025

If you didn't notice, my plan is to leave a comment on every chapter that I put out. Anyways, the cover. I'm not that great at drawing so I kept it kinda simple. Still took me like 2 hours though...

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:3

Jul 27, 2025

If you're wondering how much of this story I have planned out... It's pretty much all of it. Though I might make some changes to my current plans.
The whole story will be really long. I have no plans to stop writing though, and if I ever give up one day I'll release a final chapter that includes a summary of what I was going to do for the rest of the story.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:2

Jul 27, 2025

Hi, author here, there is another version of this chapter that I made that is more... intense. This competition doesn't allow for 18+ content, but I'm not sure if that includes strong depictions of self harm.
If anyone wants to see the original first chapter lmk and I'll do... something.

Pax; Unliving

Chapter:1

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