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Atsutashi

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registered at: Aug 06, 2025

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Sep 09, 2025

What a great wrap up for this first part of your novel! Loved the festival part, I'm so bad at aiming too. Give me your RME to shoot well, Nell! Haha😂

An Original Sin

Chapter:27

Sep 09, 2025

So that was the "special move" you said on discord that Nell would often use😭
And well, the fight and its resolution, all until the end, incredible!

An Original Sin

Chapter:26

Sep 09, 2025

I had a stroke reading Zbrke😭
Having this point of view brings another perspective to the whole story, I was blown away by the revelation when the kid appeared.

An Original Sin

Chapter:25

Sep 09, 2025

AME IS BACK !!
NOOOOOOO LITTLE MAN!!!!
I think i'm a little too expressive haha😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:24

Sep 09, 2025

While reading the chapter I knew something terrible would happen... but this... It struck right into my heart 😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:23

Sep 09, 2025

AHHHHHHHH Dominic!!! I love him even more now that I know what he went through.
They all have and had a terrible life in this group.😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:22

Sep 03, 2025

To:JTC 86

Thank you! Glad you like the prologue and I hope you will find the rest of the story as exciting ! 🤗

Fear the Night

Chapter:0

Aug 31, 2025

To:Mai

Thank you! Hope to see you following the rest of the story! 🤗

Fear the Night

Chapter:7

Aug 31, 2025

To:Mai

Thank you!!!!

Fear the Night

Chapter:3

Aug 30, 2025

JUSTICE HAS BEEN DONE !! Verwa is dead !
But Ame is in danger, hope they can make it to Cittaglia in time !😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:21

Aug 30, 2025

Verwa is an asshole !!! This message made me want to slap him!!😠

An Original Sin

Chapter:20

Aug 29, 2025

Thanks for your comment!! Glad you liked it.

I will take what you said into consideration to improve the reading quality !🤗

Fear the Night

Chapter:0

Aug 29, 2025

Love the atmosphere of the story and mostly the rhythm throughout the whole chapter. Love it !🤗

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:1

Aug 29, 2025

Really like seeing Nell going in each internal world one by one and seeing how they are desperate inside.
The quest for power is infinite so all means to obtain it are useful. Though, I never could have thought that they could linked their real body to the one inside their internal world. It's an interesting idea to gain power. 🤔

An Original Sin

Chapter:19

Aug 29, 2025

It's a real Cornelian dilemma that Nell faces. Give him some luck in his miserable life 😭

An Original Sin

Chapter:18

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