Atsutashi / Comments

Atsutashi

16 Following

18 Followers

Just a guy who likes to write.

registered at: Aug 06, 2025

Roles

Author

Badge

bronze

What is Badge?

Achievement

What is an Achievement?

Report this user

Comments

aaa

Nov 15, 2025

To:Gurg

Haha thanks Gurg! You'll have answers throughout the story (but you can still trade krishna if you want).

Yeah this chapter was written more toward the middle of FtN, so it shows at what point in FtN my writing improved haha.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story and Ryota's character, hope you'll like what's to come!

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:1

Nov 12, 2025

To:Krishna Tyagi

Thank you for reading this chapter !!

As for your suggestion, I understand your point, though it's normal that it was presented like this for this one. First, it's something that happened really fast and without much understanding with all the mysteries around what happened. Second of all, it helps highlighting the part with Ryota that came after.

There'll be more tension and descriptions in the next chapters!😆

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:1

Nov 12, 2025

Thanks for reading, snwo!! Glad you like the story and hope you'll like what’s to come.

As for the dialogue I kinda see what you mean on some parts, and I need to improve them to feel a bit more "real".

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2025

To:T.Goose

Let me keep them!! 😆

Wheelsekai : One More Spin

Chapter:4

Oct 31, 2025

What a great, funny, and sweet story! I really enjoyed reading it and being carried along on Lin and Tila’s journey!🤗

Lindiriel and the Forbidden Spell

Chapter:4

Oct 30, 2025

A compelling journey that had to come to and end... but a very satisfying one I must say. I wouldn’t mind having a sequel but I understand the fact of it being only a standalone haha. Great job steam!🤗

Literary Tense

Chapter:47

Oct 29, 2025

I must say... something as simple and effective as ‘Caterpillar-ee’ made me laugh really hard haha 😆

Literary Tense

Chapter:33

Oct 29, 2025

Well, it was sad for Mina, but... it was expected that things would turn out this way after all 😭

It was a great short read overall, and I still really love your immersive writing style! Hope to see more of it soon — it really makes me feel like I’m part of the story!

My Tragic Deaths: Miserable Mina

Chapter:5

Oct 29, 2025

die or die lol
Even with the last minute changes, the only option for her is to die😭

My Tragic Deaths: Miserable Mina

Chapter:4

Oct 29, 2025

maybe they are here to help her clean🤔😆

My Tragic Deaths: Miserable Mina

Chapter:3

Oct 29, 2025

To:Gemini Daydream

Because everyone loves sweaty men!😆

But more seriously, it's because one option is about Jeremys, Krotos, and Matos, while the other directly concerns Maxwell.

Wheelsekai : One More Spin

Chapter:4

Oct 28, 2025

Oh Maxwell could have a big ass if you want him to! It’s up to you to interpret it like this - though I really want to see him with one of those shorts 😆

Wheelsekai : One More Spin

Chapter:3

Oct 27, 2025

To:Gemini Daydream

No need for fantasy when this can be real !😭

Fragile Disguise

Chapter:2

Oct 26, 2025

To:Mara

Thank you for these kind words!🤗

Fragile Disguise

Chapter:2

Oct 25, 2025

To:Gemini Daydream

Oh, poor Maxwell—he has no idea what’s coming!😂

Wheelsekai : One More Spin

Chapter:3

Atsutashi

Novels

Gallery

Comments

Reviews

aaa