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Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Like, you know how sausage is the ground up bits of animal inside a casing? Imagine the most extreme version of that possible. I may be biased, though, as I even hate snappy hot dogs.

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Chapter:5

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

I've had haggis. You don't want haggis. You know how you wonder what sheep innards boiled in a stomach would taste like? Do not wonder. It tastes exactly like you think it would.

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Chapter:5

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

My work here is done.

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Chapter:4

Apr 24, 2026

Agreed. Big paragraph is one of the things I tried to eliminate in Sweetheart. Limiting it to three or five lines unless information is really necessary. I was still getting used to what looked good on a page here.

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Chapter:3

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Hi, im a speeling error and I am absolutely going to wreck you after you hit submit. There is no avoiding me.

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Chapter:1

Apr 24, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

Chista is a wizard, not a miracle worker.

Sweetheart: The Remade Dog Girl and Her Loyal Boy

Chapter:32

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

And also, since it was a monthly prompt challenge, I literally banged this out in a few days. I kinda liked the freedom of just going with barely any time to second guess. But if there is any story roughness, that would be why.

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Chapter:1

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

How are you reading it? I do see some spacing issues, but if I use desktop view on my android phone it looks infinitely better.

Sweetheart: The Remade Dog Girl and Her Loyal Boy

Chapter:2

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

The said thing is definitely one of the things I've worked on with Sweetheart.

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Chapter:1

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

I write on Word on my phone and hit the paste button. If I paste it from the clipboard it creates a gigantic block of text.

Sweetheart: The Remade Dog Girl and Her Loyal Boy

Chapter:2

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

That's weird, there's no double spacing in the formatting. Maybe it's a site formatting issue. I have no clue how to fix it if it’s not a problem with the way it's written.

Sweetheart: The Remade Dog Girl and Her Loyal Boy

Chapter:2

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Any help is always appreciated. Each story I've written I think I've learned something and gotten better. That's what I really need. Hell, all creatives need it. Experience, failure and growth.

Sweetheart: The Remade Dog Girl and Her Loyal Boy

Chapter:1

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thanks for the heads up. Which words? I'll check it out and see what I can do.

Sweetheart: The Remade Dog Girl and Her Loyal Boy

Chapter:2

Apr 24, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

This story is kind of me trying romance with training wheels. I'm much better suited for adventure, but I've recently grown to like a lot of romance heavy stories like Apothecary Diaries and Blue Box. I do absolutely agree, maybe this story leans more towards adventure isekai, granted, will not argue. But if I can make people want Zack and Honey to share a dance and a kiss by the end, I'll consider the experiment a success. I don't even care if I win (this is a lie). I just want to make something good with my first stab at the genre.

Sweetheart: The Remade Dog Girl and Her Loyal Boy

Chapter:1

Apr 24, 2026

To:Fernie

First, I want to say for the record I love that someone is thinking about my story. As a writer this is incredibly rewarding. Now, as for why Zack needs a guardian, technically he could have probably skated on it. But Chistos spent 500 years trying to be a good man, and leaving the two who saved his daughter to fend for themselves is something he wouldn't allow. Besides, he sees why Zack is the way he is. Zack is always trying to fix broken things, situations, people. Chistos wants to be the man who gives him a place where, one day, hopefully he won't have to fix things and he can just exist. I think Chistos sees a lot of the young man he was 500 years ago in Zack, and a lot of his friends as well.

Sweetheart: The Remade Dog Girl and Her Loyal Boy

Chapter:32

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