Jun 11, 2025
To:haunted-cassette
Yeah, not gonna lie, I kinda felt that a lot throughout the latter stages of the story. A lot of the plot points were over before we knew it, and frankly I began to miss the more light, introspective, nigh plotless flow of the first bits. I do hope you manage to recapture that feeling in the rewrite because it's what drew me to your novel in the first place <3
