Apr 29, 2025
GUH!
This chapter has, hands-down, the best moment in the series... The scene between Fire and Cyan in the car is one of your best thus far, if for no other reason than you went out of your usual technique and it paid dividends. Unfortunately, I think the impact of the transformation is very much lessened by how quickly it all plays out afterwards. I also think that sticking the scene in the same chapter as Marco's fight and escape squishes everything too much together, to the point where it feels like the plot beats can't really breathe. Still, very solid chapter. Big mwack <3
