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Oct 26, 2025

Hey, sorry for not commenting after I finished reading this the other day. My kitten (an actual cat, you'll see why that makes sense) demanded attention. I just wanted to say that your book was, hands down, one of the best things I've ever read on this website, and if you check my account's age and its associated labels, you'll find out the exact weight of that praise. (I am pretentious, yes.)

I liked it so much that I decided to break from a couple of self-imposed rules and write a short recommendation for it to the people on our Discord server. You may join there to find out (or see your views increasing, hopefully). But should you not want that, do let me know, and I'll post that review here.

Good luck in the contest, and thanks again for the experience. :)

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:28

Oct 25, 2025

Was this meant to also be a flashback? Feels like it lost the formatting.

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:24

Oct 24, 2025

Fuuuck, this is peak

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:19

Oct 24, 2025

Fellow Brit spotted (I had actually figured that out ages ago)

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:18

Oct 23, 2025

One thing I'd like to note here is that whilst I appreciate how beautifully written your prose is, I feel like the hook isn't strong enough. We have met far too many characters in far too small a span for any of them to leave any impression on me. Even with my notes, I often fail to realise what vibe the interaction between some of the more 'minor' characters should have because they're just so dang many. I feel like you could've culled some of these or staggered them out, rather than frontload them all in the first act. I get that you need to announce your actors before you give them meaning, but given how compact your scenes are, it feels like none of them have any room to breathe.

Furthermore, I'm a little put off by the mystery here. We're roughly a quarter of the length in, and I feel like I've not been even hinted at any stakes here - or the little hinting that has been done (the inquisitors, of instance) has not lent any weight to any of the events. And despite the causal link between any two scenes catching my interest at first, I can't help feeling like there's an aimlessness to this whole thing. It feels almost like slice of life with a nice little twist.

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:9

Oct 23, 2025

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Love the women in this story. They're all very cool

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:5

Oct 23, 2025

This is peak yuri at its finest. If these girls don't confess using an elaborate fighting scene, I will be upset.

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:3

Oct 14, 2025

This is a shitpost and a half, but the worst part is that I can definitely imagine Gemini roleplaying this

My Tragic Deaths: Miserable Mina

Chapter:1

Oct 14, 2025

Self-insert go brr...

This is very cute :D Love Minya cat attention span, love Hiro's equally absent absentmindedness, and love the little characters populating your story's tiny village. :3

Kitty Section

Chapter:1

Oct 06, 2025

Not this story about a barrister becoming soft capitalist/libertarian propaganda

The Barrister From Beyond

Chapter:3

Oct 06, 2025

The way you overexplain every little sound and the scenic placement of every character and little object is very exhausting to read. The prose here is overburdened by all these little details which give the reader no breathing room. You should consider leaving some things up to the imagination; sometimes less is more...

The Dreams Of The Fifth - His words Became our world

Chapter:1

Oct 04, 2025

To:Lucy

Thank you, my dear. I'm proud that you managed to finish your story and happy all the same. Looking forward to reading it in full :)

A True Hero's form

Chapter:3

Oct 02, 2025

I mean he can still dream about foxgirls... He's Japanese, that's probably in the top 5 most common fetishes

Weaver: Fragments of a Promise

Chapter:2

Oct 02, 2025

Bruh, this guy goes through his entire arc in the span of one chapter 😭😭😭😭

Weaver: Fragments of a Promise

Chapter:1

Oct 01, 2025

Astonishing!

He was ready to die but he woke up young again in a fantasy world.

Chapter:0

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