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Apr 09, 2026

Deadass, this main character is so important that the emperor himself shows him reverence?

Shinu

Chapter:1

Mar 24, 2026

Excuse me, I did not consent to be killed.

Fish Don't Know Happiness

Chapter:0

Mar 16, 2026

That's a felony, Ms. Rondar, but I suppose royalty are exempt from the laws for plebs.

Despite My Fear of Heights, the Space Princess Still Loves Me!

Chapter:3

Mar 16, 2026

De jure? No, de Vito.

Despite My Fear of Heights, the Space Princess Still Loves Me!

Chapter:2

Mar 14, 2026

Waiting patiently for the psy horror parts of this to come up. So far, it feels like I'm reading the beginning of Bardugo's Hell Bent.

11:58 - I Will See You Again at Two Minutes To Midnight

Chapter:3

Mar 14, 2026

GAY!?

11:58 - I Will See You Again at Two Minutes To Midnight

Chapter:2

Mar 14, 2026

Feels like you pulled the punches a bit there with the soft-breakdown. I feel like the move from the bedroom to the bathroom was oddly choreographed with the paragraph before.

Otherwise, this is fine, if a little cheesy on the psychological aspects. I guess it's fine for now, but it does feel a bit silly for our introduction to the character being someone who'd be prepared to fight for an empty seat on the platform. I get it's a reflection of her trauma, but it is slightly immersion breaking.

11:58 - I Will See You Again at Two Minutes To Midnight

Chapter:1

Mar 14, 2026

Yeah, this is a rom-com all right.

I Hate Dating Shows, So I Joined One to Ruin It!

Chapter:2

Mar 14, 2026

I bet she wears size 11 nikes from the men's section.

I Hate Dating Shows, So I Joined One to Ruin It!

Chapter:1

Mar 13, 2026

Did they fuck ayo

The Geometry of Final Steps

Chapter:3

Mar 13, 2026

Sore innit.

The Geometry of Final Steps

Chapter:2

Mar 13, 2026

Disco Elysium ahh voice

The Geometry of Final Steps

Chapter:0

Mar 13, 2026

Hmmm... I wonder how long will it take for this psy to horror. So far I don't get all that eerie a vibe from this story. It's a bit too whimsical for that. I guess there will come a time when Marnie will wake up from this trip, though when and how remains to be seen.

Honestly, I'm a little bit blase about what I've read so far. Whilst there is some potential here, I fear like the incipit is a bit too smooth and things are lingering in the odd space between random-seeming and symbolic. There's enough to be intriguing, but I feel like the intrigue is due to wear thin before long.

To reiterate the point from the earlier chapters, I feel like Marnie is a little too passive now. The narrative voice is definitely focusing on him, but it's almost like it's too apprehensive to dive any deeper into his frame of mind. Often enough, it feels like the plot is told from the perspective of a listless spectator. I think it's especially important for the audience to be able to relate, identify and most of all empathise with the protagonist. But beyond the tragedy surrounding his parents, and the little details that have been revealed within his therapy session, I don't see much about Marnie that sets him apart in any way. He's the yankee at King Arthur kind of ordinary, I suppose. The '''straight''' man. But he could use a couple crooks in his spine.

Rabbit Hole

Chapter:3

Mar 13, 2026

I find it so hilarious that they both carry feminine names.

The progression here felt a bit too sudden. I feel like we haven't gotten all that deep into Marnie's inner world to be invested into his taking the pill or not. Not to mention how he seemed to convince himself an illegal drug is a good idea in one sentence flat. It feels like a bit less speed would've helped cement the narrative a bit more.

Rabbit Hole

Chapter:2

Mar 13, 2026

I smell yaoi in the air.

Good deal of mystery to set us off. Prose is a bit stiff at times, but it's atmospheric enough that it doesn't wear. Let's see what chapter 2 has in store.

Rabbit Hole

Chapter:1

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