Oct 20, 2025
Wow, thanks for sharing your journey. It must be so much pressure to come up with the story from scratch and finish it in a short time, which is very impressive to accomplish🫡, and I'm sure the Lord was with you at those moments.
Although yes, I could tell some worldbuilding, descriptions, and pacing were sometimes confusing and inconsistent (but I understood that you were running short on time), I still enjoyed the concepts that your story offered to create.
I definitely sensed the Holy Spirit in two things. One, Elias' sacrifice as Jesus did for us on the Cross for our forgiveness of sin, and two, within your story's concept, when those who don't follow imagination or creativity that defies logic turn pale. It reminds me that when we don't have faith in what we don't see or in God's plan for our lives, that's how the devil tricks us into doubting and turning pale. I truly appreciated this concept you presented in this story.
Thank you for this journey and those reminders of faith in the Lord I saw in your story! I truly enjoyed reading your story, and I wish you the best in the contest! (I also entered Cyanic Odyssey in the contest! I just pray my story doesn't get kicked out for having <50,000 words🤣)
