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Exophonic writer living in Tokyo. Writes and enjoys: Urban Fantasy / Historical Fiction / NSFW / Music / Drama / Slice of Life
Would love to exchange honest feedback!
Nov 14, 2025
Your writing is so good I am literally kicking my feet giggling with glee
Over a seriously creepy atmospheric horror that is about to go down and I am SO EXCITED
Can’t wait for more!
Dude
This is SO GOOD
I love Amelia already. Total baddie.
This is all over the place but I am enjoying it XD
Nov 13, 2025
“But I wanted to.”
Iabxkabxoabxoabxoavx
And then the rest of the chapter of them being vulnerable with each other and him holding her gently without trapping her and just aaaaaaaaa my heaaaaarttttttt
He attac He protec But most importantly He got Akari’s back 🥹
Ahhhh the perfect fluffy chapter in the midst of the action <3
Please don’t mind my unhinged first read-through comments, they’re 100% vibes and screams before I will write a proper serious review and notes
I starting to like Akari more and more
Noooooooo
I was expecting something sad but this was truly heartbreaking. Very well written reveal and build-up till now, I’m so glad I started reading this!
Ohhhh the plot thickens!!!
“I know.” She whispered.
Amazing how much understanding passes between them from that simple line!
I finally got around to reading this and I’m very intrigued! <3 I’m curious as to what more Akari is hiding…
“The wives of scale-men wear their husband’s shed skin”
That had no business being that funny and cute!! lol
Very strong opening chapter! Clear, engaging writing style. Atmospheric. And I am instantly intrigued! Will be reading more!
To:Tamuna Tsertsvadze
For the longest time I did not know what kind of yokai Yuame would be, but then I came across zashiki-waraji and that fitted with the idea I had of his character!
There will be some comic relief in how very different they are XD a huge extrovert and a kind but raging introvert, for one lol
Ohh thank you for reading my work so soon! I’m really glad you like it! And thanks for those tips, I will certainly revisit and edit where needed!
Can never listen to “This Girl Is on Fire” again without thinking of Miu