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Exophonic writer living in Tokyo. Writes and enjoys: Urban Fantasy / Historical Fiction / NSFW / Music / Drama / Slice of Life
Would love to exchange honest feedback!
Nov 17, 2025
Early twenties me would have loved to visit this club xD just because of the name lol
Also this might just be because of memes but "He bamboozled Kasane" sounded too funny and cute to me instead of the actual grave situation xD maybe "bewitched" or "tricked" might work better in this context. But that is just my opinion!
AAAAaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I LOVE a good cold villain. And he is an INUGAMI
I was also so shocked that he had a hand in Aoi's scandal! I need more details on that. Definitely rereading everything once it is out.
Here for the adrenaline rush every chapter you write brings! I AM READY
To:Z1661
You're so welcome! Likewise, you reading my story and commenting was also really motivating ^^
I am going to read the next chapter asap on my break!
That’s so cool! Your cultural and historical knowledge really show in your writing 🥰
I have visited those haunted sites like the Kozukappara grounds because they’re not too far from where I live, and they’re still really eerie! A lot of it comes from imagination, but knowing the history of what took place there is really chilling. I hope I get to convey this in my writing as well!
Oh gosh, I could feel the anxiety and stress of this chapter! And even now she came out with the truth… she is still very much in danger >< she’s very brave though, and Jun quietly giving her strength was beautiful <3
Nov 16, 2025
*standing ovation*
I love this story so much!! How they healed the yurei together, the victory overshadowed by their impending doom, and now Kageyama… Ngl, he sounds hot 👀 excited to find out what kind of being he is and about his and Rei’s past!
To:Mai
Thank you so much Mai!! 🥰
And yes, aren’t they adorable 🥹 some much needed fluff before more drama…
To:Tamuna Tsertsvadze
Exactly like Z1661 said! ^^ There are so many cool and macabre stories in this area of Tokyo, and I was hoping to feature them in this narrative to combine the historical accuracy and the mysterious folklore that is still remembered today <3
Exactly!!! So cool right? Have you ever visited the site for real? Or Tokyo for that matter? By your vivid descriptions, I imagined you have!
THANK YOU once again for reading up till now and giving so much honest feedback (and truly kind compliments 🥹)
I’m afraid there is still some more build-up coming 😅 but it’s all setting up for (hopefully) a thrilling tale! (Not LN material perhaps but something! lol)
I’m so happy you mention Ukiyo-e 🥰 that is definitely the image I was hoping to paint, obviously inspired by looking at many of them from the time-period xD
But again I agree 😭 there will be action scenes in this, but especially after reading your story and others I’ve become very aware how few there might be in mine 😅 I’ll try and add a few more without detracting from the narrative, because you’re right, I’m definitely putting historical accuracy and atmosphere first 😅
I’m so glad you like it!
And you are correct 👀 without revealing too much, this entire novel is actually a prequel to a story I have been co-writing with someone. Since that couldn’t be entered in the contest, I started writing this prequel. But if you enjoy my writing and these characters, I would be honored if you would read that story too one day! ^^
Thank you so much 😭
I definitely understand what you mean. I guess when I started writing this I was more focused on accurate historical fiction, in which these type of exploitations certainly occurred. There will be more mention of it in the rest of the novel too (suggested without heavily described). It also connects to Yuame’s character and development, so it seems hard to leave out. I’ll accept the verdict of this not being a suitable LN though.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! 🥹 I really appreciate it!
Compliments on my mood-building mean a lot coming from you! And I agree with you; this is actually my first light novel and reading a number of other entries, I did wonder if my story might be fully suited for it 😅 still, I decided to enter this contest as a way to motivate myself to write again, if anything. I’m already glad if some people will like it!
To:kcayu
I personally love a good cry first thing in the morning 🥹 as long as it’s good 😤
Emotionally mature men are amazing. Sadly they’re also mostly fictional 🥲