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A hopefully future mangaka creating new storys beyond imagination

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Feb 04, 2026

To:mindokusai

I already Read to chapter 15-20 I think but youre Right I need to contiune haha :)

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:67

Feb 04, 2026

This chapter was really amazing I love the vibe and it's really exciting ;P

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:67

Jan 31, 2026

Thank you all for reading my short novel!👻

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:4

Jan 29, 2026

I'm sorry this chapter came so late I had a lot of things to do— but now it is here yay!!
I hope you will like this emotional chapter, I will start publishing 1-2 chapter/s every week from now and hope to get a ton of feedback!
Have fun reading and entering a new fantasy dream!🌱✨

Alishia

Chapter:9

Jan 29, 2026

To:DarkNova

Im so happy you like it :P
The story will Turn more magical in the following chapters, a whole new world is waiting for You and Alishia!
If you want to you can contiune Reading and Tell me what to improve and what you think of my story and the chapters :)❤️

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 29, 2026

To:DarkNova

Im glade you liked This book too!
This one is a very personal Story because I had it in my mind since childhood, im trying to improve and really put all my heart in this project and simply learn❤️

This book will have a lot more chapters in the future and will have joy, excitement and happines but also fear, sorrow and rage so contiune Reading and really feel the story and Tell me what you think :D

Alishia

Chapter:1

Jan 29, 2026

To:DarkNova

The last 1-2 chapters will come out before january 31, so I better start writing haha😱
These chapter will be the cherry on the top and have a Lot of Horror init so stay EXCITED :)

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:3

Jan 29, 2026

To:DarkNova

Yesss, I’m so glad you’re feeling that 👀🖤 I’ve been leaning into the horror tension on purpose—more to come.”
You really help me know if my writing is good and that im reaching what my goal is— making the reader feel the horror and also the excitement.
Thank you so much ❤️

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:2

Jan 29, 2026

To:DarkNova

Thank You for your feedback!
I really appreciate it and I'm happy you enjoy reading my story, im glade you feel the horror vs fear dynamic :D
I hope You will like the second chapter as well :)

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:1

Jan 21, 2026

To:Z1661

Thank you so much for your Feedback :)

I don't know yet if I will change this chapter in this direction but I am glade I improved it a bit i am really satisfied how it turned out thank you so much :)

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 17, 2026

To:mindokusai

No problem :3
Sorry for the late feedback and I will continue reading :)
Good luck ⚔️

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:62

Jan 17, 2026

To:mindokusai

I would add the feelings more, the characters thoughts could be added and their physical reactions a bit more, so the reader truly feels an emotional bound to the story :)

Still very good work :D

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:62

Jan 17, 2026

I read a few chapters and I will give goin more feedback, for this chapter I can say I really like your writing style and I love the story a lot :)

Maybe you could add a few thoughts but beside that I liked everything, keep up the good work :P

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:62

Jan 17, 2026

I really love the vibe and the story— the ,,flashback” in the beginning was very cool and got my attention, the writing style reminds me of a movie script :)
The only thing I would change is maybe describe the surrounding and feelings more, add a few thoughts and when someone says or does something say how they say or do it— instead of ,,he replied” use ,,he replied confidently/ his voice full of confidence’’ or something like this :)

This chapter was still really awesome and I will continue reading :)

Night of the Not-Deer

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

Thank you so much for this comment!
People actually reading and liking my story means a lot to me, I’m completely new to writing and publishing it so I am really happy that there are people who give me feedback and like my story :D
Also in the following chapters I’m writing rn there will be a lot of new friendship and we will dig deeper into the world Alishia landed in, so have fund reading them when they come out soon :)
I hope you will also like them and continue reading ❤️

Alishia

Chapter:6

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