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Jan 08, 2026
To:Z1661
Ahh okay this is really good feedback! :D Do you think I should add some hints to a fantasy world and 1-2 scenes where Alishia catches a quick break and soften the violence/don’t describe so much physical violence? :)
Hey, I have no idea how it comes across trauma corn to be honest, I know this is intense but there arent any scenes where This is described or like a scene of it. Can you Tell me which you think Sounds like it?
I love the idea such a cool Game of Thrones vibe :)
To:mindokusai
Yes it is 😭 I know I wrote it but I feel so bad for her, being only a child and now having such a great responsibility is very scary and exhausting :( But Kain is by her side and who knows, maybe in the future chapters there will be others too ;)
Jan 07, 2026
To:Kham'Briel M.
Aww thank you so muchhhh :D
To:Deleted User
FOR REAL 😭 I make so many mistakes haha
I really appreciate you long feedback and I will also do some :) This really helps me a lot and i am very happy that you liked my chapter :D Nancy is supposed to be a bit grumpy with dry humor and im really glade my idea that many people would find her reletable works :)
A new chapter will soon be postet and I can’t wait to read your new chapters :S
I one the Cover and your writing is good :) I would add more details but still cool chapter :)
I live the Story idea it's really unique and interesting :) I would reccomend adding more paragraphs ;)
To:Polly_Iris
Thank you I hope it's scary 👻
Haha who knows who knows ;)
I know, she has a really hard life :( But if you continue reading her life will get and she will be a lot happier :D
Jan 06, 2026
I love your writing style, it's dramatic from the beginning and I can really feel the emotions in it. I love the idea and the first chapter was amazing, I cannot wait to read the next one, I love the way you are writing and just wanna say it's amazing :D
UNDERRATED book I liked it :)
Thank you so much, I really appreciate that you take time to give me some feedback, I really need it :)