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Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

*never

Alishia

Chapter:4

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

I really appreciate that you read till now and for your feedback it helps me a lot :)
I hope you enjoyed reading so far and that you will continue , it will get more exciting and way more magical in a whole new world , a world you have ever seen before!
Have fun reading and I also will read you book soon ;)

Alishia

Chapter:4

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

Alishia is a fighter 💪

Alishia

Chapter:3

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

Thank you again for your feedback!
I wrote in this style because I read a lot of mangas myself and want to be a mangaka in the future so I think that is why I wrote with italics and emphasized lines haha :)
I know it can be weird or unfamiliar at first but I think most will get used to it :D
And I’m really happy that Alishias suffering was communicated , this is a very dark chapter but that is just how he life is sadly.
Atleast for now, I’m the following chapters there will be some big changes but I can tell you I will change them a bit in the following days because I’m not satisfied yet :)
I have corrected to House of loneliness so far and I will be done with all my chapters in about 2-3 days I think :D

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

You are completely right!
I’m glade someone notices that there is more behind Ronja and the bullies but also that it isn’t the arbitrary hostility bullies you mostly see in fiction, it is way deeper than that but I don’t want to spoiler too much haha :)
I hope you will also like my other chapters and if you don’t like something or would write it differently let me know I need feedback :)

Alishia

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

Im really glade you like it :)

Alishia

Chapter:0

Jan 11, 2026

To:Z1661

Thank you a lot,really :)
I changed the scene a bit and made the fighting scene more intense and Alishia fights back more, I’m really happy with what I have now :D
I am really grateful for this feedback, really 🩷

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 10, 2026

To:Z1661

If you could take a look at the corrected chapter this would help me so much!
Because I really don’t know what I’m doing wrong and what I should change

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 10, 2026

To:Z1661

I really appreciate your feedback :)
But I uploaded one corrected chapter yesterday and most people said they like the first version more, so I only changed the fighting scene, what do you think about it?
I personally don’t wanna really change this chapter much but I get what you’re thinking I’m still unsure to be honest but do you think the fighting scene changed something?

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 08, 2026

To:Z1661

Ahh okay this is really good feedback! :D
Do you think I should add some hints to a fantasy world and 1-2 scenes where Alishia catches a quick break and soften the violence/don’t describe so much physical violence? :)

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 08, 2026

To:Z1661

Hey,
I have no idea how it comes across trauma corn to be honest, I know this is intense but there arent any scenes where This is described or like a scene of it.
Can you Tell me which you think Sounds like it?

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 08, 2026

I love the idea such a cool Game of Thrones vibe :)

Exotere

Chapter:1

Jan 08, 2026

To:mindokusai

Yes it is 😭
I know I wrote it but I feel so bad for her, being only a child and now having such a great responsibility is very scary and exhausting :(
But Kain is by her side and who knows, maybe in the future chapters there will be others too ;)

Alishia

Chapter:7

Jan 07, 2026

To:Kham'Briel M.

Aww thank you so muchhhh :D

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:1

Jan 07, 2026

To:Deleted User

FOR REAL 😭
I make so many mistakes haha

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:2

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