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Jan 29, 2026

To:DarkNova

The last 1-2 chapters will come out before january 31, so I better start writing haha😱
These chapter will be the cherry on the top and have a Lot of Horror init so stay EXCITED :)

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:3

Jan 29, 2026

To:DarkNova

Yesss, I’m so glad you’re feeling that 👀🖤 I’ve been leaning into the horror tension on purpose—more to come.”
You really help me know if my writing is good and that im reaching what my goal is— making the reader feel the horror and also the excitement.
Thank you so much ❤️

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:2

Jan 29, 2026

To:DarkNova

Thank You for your feedback!
I really appreciate it and I'm happy you enjoy reading my story, im glade you feel the horror vs fear dynamic :D
I hope You will like the second chapter as well :)

School Trip - It hides in the dark

Chapter:1

Jan 21, 2026

To:Z1661

Thank you so much for your Feedback :)

I don't know yet if I will change this chapter in this direction but I am glade I improved it a bit i am really satisfied how it turned out thank you so much :)

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 17, 2026

I really love the vibe and the story— the ,,flashback” in the beginning was very cool and got my attention, the writing style reminds me of a movie script :)
The only thing I would change is maybe describe the surrounding and feelings more, add a few thoughts and when someone says or does something say how they say or do it— instead of ,,he replied” use ,,he replied confidently/ his voice full of confidence’’ or something like this :)

This chapter was still really awesome and I will continue reading :)

Night of the Not-Deer

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

Thank you so much for this comment!
People actually reading and liking my story means a lot to me, I’m completely new to writing and publishing it so I am really happy that there are people who give me feedback and like my story :D
Also in the following chapters I’m writing rn there will be a lot of new friendship and we will dig deeper into the world Alishia landed in, so have fund reading them when they come out soon :)
I hope you will also like them and continue reading ❤️

Alishia

Chapter:6

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

*never

Alishia

Chapter:4

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

I really appreciate that you read till now and for your feedback it helps me a lot :)
I hope you enjoyed reading so far and that you will continue , it will get more exciting and way more magical in a whole new world , a world you have ever seen before!
Have fun reading and I also will read you book soon ;)

Alishia

Chapter:4

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

Alishia is a fighter 💪

Alishia

Chapter:3

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

Thank you again for your feedback!
I wrote in this style because I read a lot of mangas myself and want to be a mangaka in the future so I think that is why I wrote with italics and emphasized lines haha :)
I know it can be weird or unfamiliar at first but I think most will get used to it :D
And I’m really happy that Alishias suffering was communicated , this is a very dark chapter but that is just how he life is sadly.
Atleast for now, I’m the following chapters there will be some big changes but I can tell you I will change them a bit in the following days because I’m not satisfied yet :)
I have corrected to House of loneliness so far and I will be done with all my chapters in about 2-3 days I think :D

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

You are completely right!
I’m glade someone notices that there is more behind Ronja and the bullies but also that it isn’t the arbitrary hostility bullies you mostly see in fiction, it is way deeper than that but I don’t want to spoiler too much haha :)
I hope you will also like my other chapters and if you don’t like something or would write it differently let me know I need feedback :)

Alishia

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2026

To:Austin H

Im really glade you like it :)

Alishia

Chapter:0

Jan 11, 2026

To:Z1661

Thank you a lot,really :)
I changed the scene a bit and made the fighting scene more intense and Alishia fights back more, I’m really happy with what I have now :D
I am really grateful for this feedback, really 🩷

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 10, 2026

To:Z1661

If you could take a look at the corrected chapter this would help me so much!
Because I really don’t know what I’m doing wrong and what I should change

Alishia

Chapter:2

Jan 10, 2026

To:Z1661

I really appreciate your feedback :)
But I uploaded one corrected chapter yesterday and most people said they like the first version more, so I only changed the fighting scene, what do you think about it?
I personally don’t wanna really change this chapter much but I get what you’re thinking I’m still unsure to be honest but do you think the fighting scene changed something?

Alishia

Chapter:2

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