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registered at: Dec 20, 2025

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Dec 23, 2025

To:k.manikumar_official

This really means a lot to me and I’m really glade that someone out there actually likes what I write :)
Thank you so much for your feedback and stay excite the best is about to come 💕✨

Alishia

Chapter:2

Dec 22, 2025

It is a really good idea with an exciting start
I would describe more the way how your characters Talk and Focus more on their tought.
Also mi when youre Talking maybe mix it up with describing the surroundings and dont make it like a sequence so it can keep the tension :)

The Thousand Year Stare

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

I really love the vibe and the story :)
But it feels like sequence, first talking then describing surroundings i would mix this up so the tension doesnt fade away
It was very exciting at first but i think the kind of sequence writing style made it fade, but still it has a Lot of potential and i think it can become very good :)

Fragments of Rohana

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:Bubbly_bubble

Some people don’t like it and some enjoy it :)
I’m really glade this book found the right person and be prepared for more soon upcoming exciting chapters

Alishia

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:Bubbly_bubble

Thank you a lot this really is a motivation!
I’m glade you enjoy my story and I promise you the fantasy part will be even better , a whole new world is waiting for you :D

Alishia

Chapter:2

Dec 22, 2025

I really like the idea but I would describe the surroundings a Bit more but still really cool :)

Sing A Song For The gods

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

The idea is really cool and your storytelling is good but if You describe the surroundings and emotions a Bit more it could become Even better :)

Keep Me Safe

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:Krieggod

Good luck :)

Manor of the Supernatural

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:k.manikumar_official

Yep Alishia has a really rough life but to be honest sometimes that just reality.
Not everyone has a good life and I showed so much violence to show what she has to deal with at such a young age and how it will affect her later, i know its dark but thats how my novel is :)
Thank you so much for reading it and i hope you enjoyed it and maybe will read my other chapters in the future too :D

Alishia

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

The start is really exciting an I love your idea :)
Your storytelling is really good and you know how to catch a readers attention

Kijin: Neo Haikyo JAPON

Chapter:0

Dec 22, 2025

I really Like This book :)
But sadly because honeyfeed is a Small Website your chapters 2-3 didnt get as much attention i would rechnend posting every 1-3 days so others still contiune reading :)

Manor of the Supernatural

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

I really like the vibe and the conversations of the characters :)
But i feel like inbetween the Talking there could be a Bit more describing of the surrounding or feeling so it gets an intense feeling :)
Also if you want your chapters to get much views I rechnend uploading one every 1-3 days but I See a Lot of Potential and cool vibe here

The Beast of the Amarok

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:Chaitanya

You can do it your ideas are already awesome :)

Shadow World

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

It is really cool and i love how you explain your ideas in the book and how they characters Talk to each other.
I would just describe their feelings more and also the surroundings because it give a more intense feeling and would make me wanna know more about them :)

Shadow World

Chapter:1

Dec 21, 2025

Its cool especially the Cover but could be a Bit longer its really Short. :)

I Am a Angel Player

Chapter:1

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