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A hopefully future mangaka creating new storys beyond imagination

registered at: Dec 20, 2025

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aaa

Dec 22, 2025

I really love the vibe and the story :)
But it feels like sequence, first talking then describing surroundings i would mix this up so the tension doesnt fade away
It was very exciting at first but i think the kind of sequence writing style made it fade, but still it has a Lot of potential and i think it can become very good :)

Fragments of Rohana

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:Bubbly_bubble

Some people don’t like it and some enjoy it :)
I’m really glade this book found the right person and be prepared for more soon upcoming exciting chapters

Alishia

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:Bubbly_bubble

Thank you a lot this really is a motivation!
I’m glade you enjoy my story and I promise you the fantasy part will be even better , a whole new world is waiting for you :D

Alishia

Chapter:2

Dec 22, 2025

I really like the idea but I would describe the surroundings a Bit more but still really cool :)

Sing A Song For The gods

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

The idea is really cool and your storytelling is good but if You describe the surroundings and emotions a Bit more it could become Even better :)

Keep Me Safe

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:Krieggod

Good luck :)

Manor of the Supernatural

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:k.manikumar_official

Yep Alishia has a really rough life but to be honest sometimes that just reality.
Not everyone has a good life and I showed so much violence to show what she has to deal with at such a young age and how it will affect her later, i know its dark but thats how my novel is :)
Thank you so much for reading it and i hope you enjoyed it and maybe will read my other chapters in the future too :D

Alishia

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

The start is really exciting an I love your idea :)
Your storytelling is really good and you know how to catch a readers attention

Kijin: Neo Haikyo JAPON

Chapter:0

Dec 22, 2025

I really Like This book :)
But sadly because honeyfeed is a Small Website your chapters 2-3 didnt get as much attention i would rechnend posting every 1-3 days so others still contiune reading :)

Manor of the Supernatural

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

I really like the vibe and the conversations of the characters :)
But i feel like inbetween the Talking there could be a Bit more describing of the surrounding or feeling so it gets an intense feeling :)
Also if you want your chapters to get much views I rechnend uploading one every 1-3 days but I See a Lot of Potential and cool vibe here

The Beast of the Amarok

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

To:Chaitanya

You can do it your ideas are already awesome :)

Shadow World

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2025

It is really cool and i love how you explain your ideas in the book and how they characters Talk to each other.
I would just describe their feelings more and also the surroundings because it give a more intense feeling and would make me wanna know more about them :)

Shadow World

Chapter:1

Dec 21, 2025

Its cool especially the Cover but could be a Bit longer its really Short. :)

I Am a Angel Player

Chapter:1

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