Jun 06, 2026
I remember Liberi Fatali! It's been a while.
Some suggestions, but more with logistics rather than the story itself, which is interesting. Your chapters are long, so I propose you cut them up I to shorter chunks when you post them. Secondly, you might want to space out the posting, like one a day, rather than all 12 gigantic chapters at once. You will intimidate potential readers!