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Oct 09, 2026

I'm a little confused. I thought if they had the hammer they could just use it.

Liran's Song

Chapter:50

Oct 08, 2026

Good job making the dragon an interesting character rather than just background.

Liran's Song

Chapter:49

Oct 08, 2026

Well that easier than expected. But the dragon is a pretty cool character.

Liran's Song

Chapter:48

Oct 08, 2026

The candy was the highlight of the chapter.

Liran's Song

Chapter:47

Oct 08, 2026

You really have intricate and methodical world building. Stealing a dragon's treasure reminds me of the hobbit. But they don't need to steal the hammer only use it to destroy the morningstar.

Liran's Song

Chapter:46

Oct 08, 2026

Why do dying people never remember to name names but instead just say ambiguous pronouns.

Liran's Song

Chapter:45

Oct 08, 2026

To:Soulwriter861

She most definately wasn't okay with it, but for Mori "Kathi" is his Katherina. And I think she deservs a taste of her own medicine having renamed Mori from 'Kou' and established the Kathi-N convention.
Camping in the forest was also a unique experience for her.

Time Slider Katherina

Chapter:16

Oct 08, 2026

That was interessting. Definately a unique setting/story I haven't read before.

The dilemma is concrete, not decorative. Ameranth is not arguing about sentience in the abstract. The Igni are the only practical source of Enzyme 24B, Heliconia owns the farms that supply it, and Oncidium’s fix is selective breeding plus culling. Survival, profit, and ethics are the same argument, so every line of the meeting has a stake.

Her disgust and her training pull in opposite directions. When Oncidium says they already breed animals for docility, the scientist in her agrees and her stomach does not. That split is more interesting than a clean moral stance, and it makes the coming vote feel costly instead of obvious.

Ending without resolving the vote is also quite daring. But it works because there are no easy choices.

The Weight of One Grain

Chapter:1

Oct 08, 2026

To:VoidStar

Thank you for reading this far, this same scene was actually shown in the prologue but I am not sure it was apparent haha.

The Hero of the Mist Tragedy

Chapter:29

Oct 08, 2026

And most of all Natsume thought she saw him die so she never considered he might still be alive.

The Hero of the Mist Tragedy

Chapter:28

Oct 08, 2026

To:VoidStar

Thank you for reading, yes that is a good question. He was touched by the mist, his hair and his whole appearance changed. he went from a confident prodigy to a restrained "innkeeper's boy" which I think shows in body language.

And he was careful to keep as much distance as possible between him and people who might recognize him (Tenno, Natsume, Reika) which becomes more apparent on a reread (not sure if anyone will bother haha). But I tried to plant this carefully...

The Hero of the Mist Tragedy

Chapter:28

Oct 08, 2026

To:VoidStar

Thank you for reading, in my head Reika suspected him uncounciously which is why she chose him.

The Hero of the Mist Tragedy

Chapter:27

Oct 07, 2026

To:mindokusai

Thank you for reading

The Bureaucracy of Blood

Chapter:1

Oct 07, 2026

These wizards can be quite nasty... And was it really necessary to walk all this way of they could have just teleported?

Liran's Song

Chapter:44

Oct 07, 2026

I like that the story can alternate between more fun / less serious moments and more serious ones like this chapter.

Liran's Song

Chapter:43

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