Albion K. D. Kuki

Albion K. D. Kuki

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May 13, 2022

And just like that I kinda wish my previous comments were not as emotional as I tend to get.
Runo got the scenes he needed to not seem like an insufferable idiot any longer, and Netty... Well, she is still pretty annoying. 😅
Now they both seem like decent people... Anyway, isn't it fun when characters are just there to be killed? I thought the monster was a puppeteer or a fond-people hallucinator or something, not a spiky tongue-slinger.
I would've loved Runo if he threw one of those grass blades through Iris at the thing like a badass, but alas he didn't.
I call that a missed opportunity.
For now I'll randomly say that the scientist might be Dolly's maker? Cringing at my old theories will be fun after completing this.
Well, the info-dump actually wasn't that bad all things considered. It's what many would start their story with, so I guess I should appreciate it being here. This is also better than to try and disguise it as a conversation, or should I say it's simpler and as such easier to get right.
And now it's onwards to the next fight? Lots of fighting in here, huh? I mean sure, but the I kinda want the fights to reveal stuff if they are so prevalent in this web novel.
Still wondering about that exploding foliage, btw. Getting an in-depth explanation of those is my second priority after the main story's conclusion.

PS: A baseball bat? Seems randomly specific for a living space in this deadly realm. Oh yeah, do those things sleep? That hasn't been a problem yet even though it really should be.

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Realm Assassin
REALM ASSASSIN
Chapter:9

May 13, 2022

Before I even start on the chapter - good job on Noah's killer being the invisible thingy. That was good. I didn't have to call BS. 👌🏻

Anyway, is the next chapter a backstory dump disguised as a bedtime (repairtime) story?

Something about this Runo dude just makes me wish he's a double agent or something. Just teach him a lesson and exert rightful justice upon his arrogant behind!
Especially the energy bar eating. I have the misfortune of living with a glutton in the same house, and if I don't store my personal/favorite food items in a locked box in my room they will inevitably be eaten before I can take one bite of it. Anything that belongs in the fridge is immediately gone in an hour or two. So rip me and this trauma of mine because Runo is now on my list of suspect individuals. Even if Dolly didn't need the food, taking it from her and eating it just irks me.
Then there's Netty who is always laughing and enjoying herself. I also have the misfortune of knowing several overbearingly positive individuals like that, which is another trauma that makes me auspect of her immediately.
With Netty I can somehow overpower it with logic and hopefulness since she seems nice, but Runo needs to show some good moments for me to accept him after stealing food! 🤬

Well, now that my unreasonable feelings over fictional characters are out of the way, I can say that this continues to be a good read.
Since I haven't read the other contestants for the contest I can't yet say if this deserved the win, but it definitely deserves the praise.
Of course it misses some character work, agency, polish, and whatever a professional would have to say. Still it engages people, and that is something to be proud of.

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Realm Assassin
REALM ASSASSIN
Chapter:8




May 12, 2022

I don't even like Noah all that much and this made me sad... Or at least a teensy tiny bit unhappy. Well, it was a shocking thing to suddenly happen - so sudden that imma call big BS if this isn't the invisible monster that other Dolly mentioned earlier.
Anyway, Dolly's mannerisms from the start make me wonder what the hell this world even is.
They have enough technical prowess to accurately emulate both a functioning human brain and years, possibly decades of memories as proven by Dolly, who just recently awoke... What was it, a few days ago?
If this world has access to that, or the Maker at least, then how come the world is so much like our own? Are the airplanes normal ones or special super-airplanes? Did technology advance rapidly since Noah was little? How old is he, 23? I'm too lazy to check right now. That seems strange. Is it only the Maker?
Another theory I have right now is that he used living humans as test subjects for his Dollys and juat erased some memories through electric torture or something.
I mean, Dolly thinks and talks very much like a very normal person, not an android built for destruction. And she can feel emotions, like-

Anyway, I think I'll keep the humans-as-a-base-for-Dollys theory in mind for now.

My other suspicion is that the Maker actually made all the wild monsters or their mothers who were somehow able to learn how to reproduce kinda like the dinosaurs in one of the Jurassic Park movies that weren't supposed to so so?

Much speculation, but anyway - Noah is gone. I'm pretty much over it already, so let's see Dolly's reaction.

PS: May Noah ride his arc to the afterlife in peace. 🙏🏻

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Realm Assassin
REALM ASSASSIN
Chapter:4