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Jun 10, 2022

Those government or company people should've used tranquilizer bullets. Doesn't kill the target, merely makes them ripe for the picking, and you can question them all you want when they wake up. Especially in cases like this, where the target has valuable information or could even finction as leverage for the AI you want to find. Killing him seems overly drastic when he can still be of some use.

Well, now his friend is involved as well. Poor girl. She didn't deserve that, though she was so close to him when the gunman arrived that no lie would've kept her out of this in the first place.

They could either go for the other people he is known to associate with next, or scan for the bike? As if they didn't install a tracker into Suzuki... Well, maybe they didn't.

Motor (Part 1)

Chapter:5

Jun 10, 2022

So... He doesn't want to pull people in but now involves Courtney, because... Why, exactly? I didn't feel much of a mental breakdown from him. Even the cliché line of "Leave me the fuck alone, Courtney! I said it was alright!" would've worked better I feel.

Or some other lie or story about how the bike is broken and his old one is somehow gone. He now worries about what will happen if both are unusable or some other crap like that. Hell, he could casually mention how someone broke into his garage one day after getting a bike and how that destroys him.

I know people can't come up with stories like that on the fly under stress, but just involving her like this felt... Cheap, perhaps.

Also need to consider how Suzuki will react to her.

Motor (Part 1)

Chapter:4

Jun 10, 2022

I wondered about this from the start, but how come he can just ride a fucking motorcycle with no prior training? I sat on one in the back but never drove one myself. I drive a bicycle like this guy does, but I just can't imagine it being similar to driving a motorbike in the least. Suzuki helped him out there, didn't she?

Also, they will just leave him? I find that hard to believe. Here they have some random dude who rode her, and even if he was just an uninvolved bystander who somehow happened to end up on that bike, he would at least know where Suzuki let him down or where she went next, right? Give them some clues?

Motor (Part 1)

Chapter:3

Jun 10, 2022

Ok, this is actually pretty interesting.

It's in the same vein as Feline Friends purely from a premise perspective, but the goal etc of the transforming visitor is something else entirely.

If they already know where he lives, he can't even return there now, can he?

And what did she do to the innocent bike? 😭🙏🏻🚲

Motor (Part 1)

Chapter:2

Jun 10, 2022

If this is anything like Feline Friends, his bike transformed into a motorbike because something was wrong with his owner's life that needs fixing. And by the end of the story, it will return to being a normal bike again...

I highly doubt that this author would write two stories that were basically the same, so it's something else. Like, a magical motorbikerace takes place and randomly selects the most abled people for such a thing...

Or this bike belonged to someone else that mistreated him, and this bike somehow chose this dude as a suitable master. Also love this bike's sass when someone else tries to touch it. Reminds me of horses that won't let just anyone ride on their backs.

Motor (Part 1)

Chapter:1

Jun 10, 2022

I smell a from-hate-to-respect arc coming with that kid. Those two hugged like relatives who used to be close but moved far away, only to come together after many years once more.

I could also see Evan bonding with the kid since her sass may remind him of his own sister or something. (If it even is sass and not pure hatred.)

Also love his appreciation for horses. Please give him some moments of showing his skills when it comes to 'peasants' work.'

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:35

Jun 10, 2022

I'm officially over the Evan-Hanasuke situation when it comes to Sereya's romance. Just adorable, those two. Evan complained that Sereya had a chemistry with Remus that he wished he had, but if this volume really turns out to be slow and character-driven, then I feel that won't be a problem much longer.

(I always forget to comment on it in the last chapters, but props for the 'so scared her sweat seemed to crawl upwards' or something like that description of the barmaid. Made me crack up.)

I hope Eveline makes something sisterly when they return.

Honestly enjoy the character moments here more than the fighting in volume 1. Not that I dislike fighting, but unless the reader cares deeply about the characters, those fights will always remain money shots. (Yes, I remember the tips you gave in the addendum-prologue you wrote. 😉)

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:34

Jun 10, 2022

It seems after everything that happened I am the most naive one. 😂 Well, it is the Hero's blade but not a well-known one.

This chapter is just precious. Like there's a history to these people that waits to be uncovered by the reader.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:33

Jun 10, 2022

Aren't the hero weapons immediate eye-catchers among basically everyone? At least give him an inconspicuous sheath to go with it so that people don't think he actually has the strength of a hero.

I really enjoy the deeper reason for why Evan's actions were unwise. Not because he broke some expectations from Sereya or because he ended up almost getting framed, but because of something deeper. Nice. 👌🏻

But I don't know, seeing Remus and Evan in the same scene almost gives me anxiety. 😂

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:32

Jun 10, 2022

The first volume is still fresh in my mind, and it feels good to see Evan get used to his new life. At first he seemed a bit too confident compared to his version in volume 1, but then he ran away and all was well.

I love how city guards in stories always believe anything the 'weak woman' tells them, even if it's false from start to finish.

Back in the day, without constant surveillance and readiness of smartphones and cameras to record stuff, word of mouth really was everything they had. Mad respect to the few people who did a Sherlock and actually collected the hidden clues of truth in those days.

Now I wanna know what this girl's problem is.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:31

Jun 09, 2022

Once again there seems to be a flashback of sorts in the middle of the chapter. Was the goal of this thing to present a non-linear mystery where the characters behave off in every chapter until the puzzle comes together at the end? Well, without the end I'm simply left confused.

If you ever pick this story up again, which I hope you will, then you should start with a major overhaul of what you already have. It's just not up to the new standard of Honeyfeed anymore. I'd like to see where this little mess was going, so I'l quietly pray for its eventual return.

The Awakening

Chapter:4

Jun 09, 2022

Maybe it's the admittedly atrocious formatting, but the only distinctions I can make between these characters is that one is a boy and the others are girls.

There was even that one jump to something 4 months prior that I almost missed because it wasn't properly shown to me that said jump was going to happen.

All in all, very confusing. Could honestly have some good potential if grammar, punctuation, and formatting were fixed to the common standard on this site. Then you could let your creativity run free and everything would be alright...

Well, everything aside from the premature ending next chapter.

Sad face. 😭

The Awakening

Chapter:3

Jun 09, 2022

After that prologue this just causes the pclace to crawl to a screeching halt. Not sure if that's desirable in this case.

This thing is basically one large info dump of the environment, and I doubt anyone actually remembered anything since nothing else happened here. I got that this is a school, but... Honestly, that's already it. Also, one boy with three girls. Probably harem material.

Btw, you know this is old when the prologue is labeled as 'chapter 1' and chapter 1 is labeled as 'chapter 2.' Honeyfeed only implemented that a while after their debut on the web novel landscape.

Good times, good times...
Ah, the memories.

The Awakening

Chapter:2

Jun 09, 2022

From everything that's going on I assume this prologue plays out in the magical dimension? The synopsis mentions that the Awakened can use magic in our world too, but does that encompass the creation of Dragons?

I know too little to be sure, but this is intriguing.

Btw, aren't you the light novel podcast dude from a while back?

The Awakening

Chapter:1

Jun 08, 2022

To:Harmonica Writes

Pretty sure I'll like it even more if that's the case. I hate it when MC's (predominantly in Isekai novels) start out with half a book or even longer of lonesome grinding by themselves. By this point only 'Spider, so What' had a long single-character sequence I enjoyed...

Anyway, I'm saying I love it when stories focus on characters and character moments, even better if some character development is thrown in there.

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:30

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