Jun 06, 2022
It's an enjoyable little story, the earliest one that found its way to a conclusion.
My biggest gripe with it is the length, or rather shortness of it. Certain plot points didn't have the time to properly develop, and we see it again here in the conclusion - it is all rather abrupt.
Stuff happens and is resolved very quickly. It's like the 'villain of the week' thing in Power Rangers, only with character development. Someone below praised the pacing, but I feel it would've benefitted from some proper handling.
All in all I enjoyed it. The cats turn to catgirls in the time of their owners' need - kinda like guardian deities of their relationship. I guess it makes sense that they were relegated to the background the more their owners took steps towards happiness on their own. Still would've liked to see more of them. The characters in general had nice development overall but the steps they took felt altogether clunky.
Anyway, thanks for writing this sweet little tale, though you probably won't read this comment. 😌🙏🏻