Jul 18, 2021
Finally caught up and I must say your writing style is rather simple but effective; it's strong when it comes to truly understanding your main characters and their thought process so I appreciate that!
I once tried to make my dialogues like yours where I don't add a lot of words after a speech until someone mentioned that doing that might make it hard for some readers to visualize and hear the tone. I can sort of understand where they're coming from now as I read yours; my reading comprehension isn't the best so when it's just dialogue after dialogue I think after the 4th or 5th I just got lost and my brain can't recall who said who, I'm smol brain like that OTL A lot of the movements the characters do are also left up to imagination as they talk, which makes the flow smooth but it might be a little hard for those that need assistance in visualizing what they're doing. Either way, I am getting the hang of it and the interactions are honestly the best, the bathroom scene with Aaron was hilarious LMAO
