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Pearlyn.M

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Winner of MAL x Honeyfeed 2021 with my novel, Realm Assassin.

registered at: Jul 04, 2021

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Jul 18, 2021

To:K-J-Whitten

I did! I rewrote the first 2 chapters after getting some helpful tips on how to make my writing style a little smoother lol I am still learning but I want to say I'm more confident of my work from chapter 3+

and OMG TYSM for pointing those out!! OTL I will correct them asap. Noah's 20 so he's a man, I'll change all the "boy" LOL

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Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

To:meech

TYSM Meech! I do apologize if the next 2 chapters are a bit longer than the rest as those were rewrites OTL Hopefully you'll enjoy the plot twists ahead and action sequences, I appreciate you ^w^ <3

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Chapter:0

Jul 18, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thank you so much!! I appreciate this, I try to write dynamic/different personalities OTL

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Chapter:7

Jul 18, 2021

To:fujisprouts

Waaaah TYSM! Glad to hear your favorite character is Netty!! She's super cool < 3

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Chapter:7

Jul 18, 2021

To:Deleted User

Same....maybe "wow"? XD

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Chapter:5

Jul 18, 2021

To:Deleted User

Y E S

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Chapter:4

Jul 18, 2021

To:Deleted User

Glad to hear that my favorite boi is your husbando IG LMAO

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Chapter:3

Jul 18, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thank you so much!! The fantasy elements in this setting will be unraveled slowly haha But I appreciate yr words ^w^

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Chapter:2

Jul 18, 2021

To:Deleted User

Daaaamn

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Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

To:znf

ZNF hello!! <3

I genuinely appreciate you keeping up with the novel as there's no pressure to do so, but regardless I want to thank you for your time in reading ^w^

Thank you for the tips! I like that everyone has different tastes because I am personally a huge sucker in flashback scenes before/after death, or a scene that comes back after being hinted out prior (In chapter 2, I briefly mentioned that Noah and Dolly found some berries. But then I left it at that and moved on with the story with the purpose of expanding that scene as more of an emotional gripe etc) However I will keep your tips in mind as I have another plot point coming up and I want to use your suggestion for that instead of any flashbacks ^w^ Experimenting you know x) Thank you again for your advice, super appreciate <3

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Chapter:7

Jul 18, 2021

To:OscarHM

Hihi!! Thank you so much for reading I appreciate you! <3
And yes, alas as a novice writer I have learned more about writing by joining this contest and it's been so much fun to experiment! As I keep writing I am slowly wishing I could rewrite the rewrite of my first 2 chapters as I too agree they weren't my strongest. I was still looking for my writing style lol

TYSM for your input and I hope you look forward to more chaos <3

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Chapter:7

Jul 18, 2021

To:Kino

TY!! ^W^
And yes haha, even in suspenseful, serious stories, they will need to have a talk about huge bosoms lol

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Chapter:0

Jul 18, 2021

To:kazesenken

Oui

But I changed that now : 3 I haven't forgiven you though-

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:9

Jul 18, 2021

First off, I was eating fish. Second, remind me to NEVER try to predict a chapter of yours again LMAO
The armpit part was funny, and when they were about to meet the beastkin I was like ah, ok, big beast men people-
NOPE.
YOU HAD TO PULL OUT BUNNY GIRLS-
Do you know how it feels when you choke on fish?
And then Snazzy really had to wrap his tentacles around them and THEN PRESS their chests on his face??
Do you know how long 10 minutes is? THAT IS WILD LOL
HE DESERVES ARMPIT PUNISHMENT, BUT EVEN I CAN'T SEE THAT AS A CONSEQUENCE ANYMORE-
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Anyways good chapter-

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Chapter:9

Jul 18, 2021

To:Joe Gold

It’s just one genre! I purposely left the descriptions of the other realms (and how many for the matter) vague as it’s not important to the story just yet nor is Dolly aware of such, but I will say all realms have the same forest/jungle setting upon entering. Hope you’ll get some answers if you plan to read ahead, I’m just a huge fan of slowly unraveling things 🙏

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