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Pearlyn.M

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Winner of MAL x Honeyfeed 2021 with my novel, Realm Assassin.

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Jul 11, 2021

To:Henry Zhang

Lmao did you read Part 1 xD Also, beginning of Part 2, the monster was hinted x)

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:4

Jul 11, 2021

The way you describe your monsters, just brilliant.
A lot is going on but it fits so well with the tension that's happening. Ven's going to have some nice trauma after the way you ended this chapter OTL

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:2

Jul 11, 2021

To:Gurg

Oh this isn't the illegal cliffhanger I was talking about xD Chapter 3 was so long I decided to divide it. Posting the second part in 3 hours, and your respect for me will dwindle FAST.
I love Noah so much too, he's definitely the good pure boy.
I'm happy you caught the random "smell of death" sentence though, it's foreshadowing two things x) I wonder what will come next for our beloved characters....

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:3

Jul 11, 2021

To:gremnda

AHAhahahahaha!!
and I, the person everyone, including you, might start a witch hunt soon if that's how you're feeling about him xD

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:2

Jul 11, 2021

To:gremnda

Yup LOL I'm glad you caught that xD Their relationship is fresh but funky!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:1

Jul 11, 2021

To:gremnda

Thank you! Hope it was a rather questionable start to a story haha

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:0

Jul 11, 2021

To:fujisprouts

Ah my beloved, thank you for your heartwarming compliments!! Runo lowkey is a favorite boy of mine, I just........ :, )
I hope to bring more happiness to everyone in Part 2! Noah and Dolly needs their resolve QwQ

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:3

Jul 11, 2021

To:sajihon

Woah kudos to you for being able to read all of them!! I was worried the lengths would turn eyes away but thank you so much for taking your time to write this and giving your suggestions. I went back and fixed what I can but I will keep an eye for any more errors ^w^ I hope you'll be here for chapter 3 dropping in 11 hours with the best chapter ending ever!!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:2

Jul 10, 2021

To:mugmoth

Thank you so much I’m glad you think so!! I tried my best in the revisions to describe these characters better and I’m glad it paid off. Thanks for reading!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:1

Jul 10, 2021

Oh my goodness one of the best chapters I have read Snazzy WHY ahahaha!! I could feel the tension during the card game but him betting Maribell’s bosom was such a funny kick to it.
And then that ending, aaaaaa man. I want to hug him now 😂😂

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:4

Jul 09, 2021

To:Bubbles

Hi Bubs! So glad you came back, and equally appreciative that you spent your time writing an amazing and long analysis like this!
It flatters me to hear that there is an improvement; regardless of whether it's big or small am improvement is still an improvement, and I can only thank you and many others that helped me get this far. I find it interesting that you mentioned that show, I think I know which characters you're talking about. You're also the second person to have complimented on the characterization, so thank you!! >w< <3

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:1

Jul 09, 2021

God of Rebirth, an interesting concept! Hiroshi and Lena’s relationship though, I hope one day she feels more comfortable as her individual self than a retainer!
I would advice just to make the paragraphs a little less dense. The descriptions are fine, but the writing does feel heavy for the eyes (or maybe it’s just my sensitive eyes) Either way, good job!

Reborn... as a God of Rebirth?

Chapter:1

Jul 08, 2021

Hippity Hoppity, tis goes to the library-

What a promising start, the details are astounding! and the way you just casually ended it like that, what a tease, that's illegal lmao !!

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:1

Jul 08, 2021

To:Henry Zhang

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback < 333 I appreciate it!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:2

Jul 08, 2021

To:mugmoth

I'm so glad you like that part! That was actually added in after I decided to rewrite. Happy to hear it paid off! ^w^

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:0

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