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Memo Alfonso

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Hi! I'm here for the MAL X Honeyfeed writing contest, but I hope to create good stories that like you.

registered at: Jul 06, 2021

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Jul 11, 2023

Hi Minatika! Of course, this was an emergency situation and Andrea is going to continue studying hard... although I don't promise that they won't cheat again 😂

Pretty soon you'll know how they'll do at McBurger Jr: I’m lovin’ it 🍔

Thanks for reading again 😁

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:7

Jul 08, 2023

To:Shulox

Thank you very much for the comment!

You are right, I had not noticed that there are very long paragraphs, and they can be difficult to read. I will take your advice into account for the next chapters.

Thanks for reading 😁

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:2

Jul 07, 2023

Hi! I loved how you presented the friendship between Jun and Takashi, I guess it will be very important to the story 👍

They must feel a lot of responsibility for having failed the last tournament, but the beauty of soccer is that it always gives revenge (Ask Leo Messi). ⚽❤️

Great introductory chapter! 😁

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:0

Jul 07, 2023

Is it serious that Jun complained about being handsome and rich? 😂

The world map is expanding, that's very interesting too!😁

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:9

Jul 07, 2023

A chapter that leaves a great omen. What will happen to Madam Claire? 😱

It was very interesting, but it left me with many doubts. I hope things go well for everyone 😭

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:8

Jul 07, 2023

We almost ran out of a protagonist in this chapter 😂

It is very nice to see how the love story between Jun and Mia evolves ❤️

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:7

Jul 06, 2023

To:minatika

I tried to remember my student days. Cheating on exams was an important thing to learn 🤣

My friend Minatika, thanks for reading 😁❤️

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:6

Jul 05, 2023

JAJAJAJAJAJA You caught me 😂

It gives me great pleasure to meet someone from Latin America, especially from Argentina.

By the way, congratulations on winning the world cup.

It will be a real pleasure to read your story, I'll do it when I have more time.

And again, thank you very much 😁

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2023

To:Shulox

My friend, you don't know how much your words motivated me. Thank you very much for taking the time to read my story ❤️

And yes, how do you know I speak Spanish? 🤣

By the way, the names of the main characters are also inspired by soccer players (Robin van Persie & Andrea Pirlo).

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:1

Jul 01, 2023

"I need to commune with the trees. It's an elf thing" That was so funny 🤣

I am very glad that Jun is learning how to understand the feelings of others.
Thanks for this beautiful story, when I have more time I'll stop by again ^w^

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:6

Jul 01, 2023

Oh no, there are many coincidences between what happened with Amamiya and now with Mia. I hope everything goes well 😞

I loved how you managed to connect the bulletin board thing, it was a nice touch ^w^

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:5

Jul 01, 2023

The NPC walking directly into the wall made me laugh a lot 🤣

Great chapter, things get more and more interesting. I hope Jun does well on his date ^w^

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:4

Jun 29, 2023

To:minatika

You have to understand Robin, he is desperate 🤣

Thank you very much for reading, Minatika ^w^

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:5

Jun 29, 2023

I feel like Madam Claire has a personal thing against Hiroyuki 🤣

It was a very interesting chapter ^w^

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:3

Jun 29, 2023

There were many plot twists! I loved the way you connected everything ^w^

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:2