Aug 02, 2023

To:Funsui

OMG thanks to you and Mina I actually realized the subtle Undertale reference, I swear it was unconscious 😆 but I love it, and also shares a really close meaning with what I want to transmit.
Thanks for reading Fun! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Katsuhito

My boy Katsu going Gareth Bale mode on the comments! I'm so glad you like the story this much, and thanks for the support! ❤️
Inari will sure be important for the remaining of the story, and you better prepare for some stuff 👀 mandatory 🧐 We will have again back-to-back on friday and saturday, and the #PinginariGang shall reign again 😤 thanks for supporting king, Inariara! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

Come on Oliver, show him what you got! Also Aldo carrying the scene, now they just need to finally get out of the palace in one piece 😤
Nice chapter Pern, keep it up! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Napryzon

Thanks for reading Napry, glad you liked it! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Lei

Oh wow thanks for taking your time on such a beautiful comment.

And yes, Takashi is too stubborn to stop 😅

Really thanks for your suggestion! I understand what you say but that final explanation is what really got me. I'm still a little short in english vocabulary sometimes but I'll write that down for when I edit the whole novel, so thanks.

As a footballhead I know how important coaches can be at twisting the path of players in pain, so I did give him a fairly important share of the story. I'm glad you noticed 😊

Thanks for reading Lei, hoping to see you around for more! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Lei

I'm really glad to hear that, my capy friend. Thanks for reading Lei! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Deleted User

Thank youuu! Yeah I put a lot of emphasis on the sporty part here, although it will be the most disposable thing if I go over the word count limit. Hope I don't need to!

👀 you already making up theories, I like that. Keep them with you as I always say, you might need them. Thanks for reading Benz! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Deleted User

Hahaha well... you still don't know this (and probably anything going on) but you could be surprisingly right 👀

Mayor is just zzzzzz, nobody cares 😆 Thanks for reading Benz! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Deleted User

Niceee welcome aboard then! You know my football head forced me to think "Benz? Imagine if it's because of Benzema.. it can't be, right?" so now you say this I need confirmation 👀

And there will be maaaany moments of friendship, being it an important part of the story, as well as fear coping, so hoping to see you around for more! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Memo Alfonso

IT WAS TOO MUCH SOCCER 🚬

Thanks for reading Memo! Hoping to see you around for more! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

To:Memo Alfonso

Glad you liked it Memo! The idea of the stream is from a meditation I sometimes use to calm myself down (yes, Takashi is very self-referential), and to that I added the rocks and the meaning that it holds. I liked how it could go to an even further level of thinking "everything will go away".

And the phrase was said by Julio Grondona, formed AFA president. Not my favourite person and he was not intending this same meaning, but as I'm into football I twisted it a little. That's what I also like, to give things a new and nicer meaning.
Thanks for reading Memo! ❤️

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Aug 02, 2023

Interesting as well! As a tip, I would try to give chapters a name and also do not put it also in the text, as it says three times chapter 1. Keep it up!

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Aug 02, 2023

Nice start Yamata! I'm very intrigued on where you will take this story. Just a thing: If you are in the contest, you should not insert any copyrighted names or series, so that certain isekai has to go. Just change it to something similar and we are good. Keep it up! ❤️

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Aug 01, 2023

To:yitsuin

Wow thanks for taking your time to read and comment Yit! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😊 And yeah this may sound as promoting, but if you like sports and team friendships, you have come to the right place. Romance is important (it's the center of the story after all 😅) but I wanted to imply other things like friendships and own fears, so we got a little for everyone.

And don't worry, because then we both share something with poor Takashi: Loving sports but being terrible 😆. I'm a complete footballhead and probably the worst player of all time (Takashi could be a liiiitle inspired in me 😅). Thanks for your kind words Yit, hope to see you around for more here and in Stand-In ❤️

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Aug 01, 2023

To:Steward McOy

Don't be sorry at all, and glad you liked them! Before I just had blank spaces so I tried to give it a somewhat unique touch, relieved it's working 😊

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