Aug 04, 2023

Yayyy Amiiiii long time no see! It was short but I just love her 😅

She feeling things... mandatory 🧐 now I'm intrigued, mystery gang let's rise!

Nice chapter Himi, you really hooking me up with the story. Keep it up! ❤️

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Aug 04, 2023

That is a very specific description of computer specs 😅 also fox detected 😤
Nice chapter Chris, keep it up! ❤️

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Aug 04, 2023

To:minatika

I need the VN with Toren as love interest 😍😍😍

Nooooo why twists (⁠ᗒ⁠ᗩ⁠ᗕ⁠) I just hope you don't break our hearts too much 💔

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Aug 04, 2023

To:Deleted User

Triple hat-trick lmaoooo my guy wanted him to be Haaland 😤 but yeah I would do that too for Nao.

Ohhh then you will love what's coming, cause that is never stopping to appear 👀

Glad you liked it Benz, thanks for reading! Hoping to see you around for more! ❤️

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Aug 03, 2023

To:Deleted User

Wow you having theories! I would suggest you to keep them, you never know when they can be useful 👀
Thanks for reading Benz! ❤️

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Aug 03, 2023

To:Deleted User

Takashi at least sure wants to do so. He probably wants to leave a good impression to Yukata-chan.
Thanks for reading Benz! ❤️

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Aug 03, 2023

They both have a really pure heart, but that leads to these unconfortable situations... or not so unconfortable? 🤭
Thanks for reading Mei! ❤️

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Aug 03, 2023

To:Carter

Then prepare cause lots of moments incoming!
Thanks for reading Carter! ❤️

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Aug 03, 2023

To:Carter

He sure is!

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Aug 03, 2023

To:Kaisei

They don't know they are facing Takashi Ueda, the great striker 😤
Thanks for reading Kai, nice to see you around! ❤️

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Aug 03, 2023

To:chibiandreea

I'm glad you liked the deep depiction. And as I said before, he's just being judged cause he died, not because they have anything special against him. It's the cruel order of things.
Thanks for reading Chibi! ❤️

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Aug 03, 2023

Airi is the spirit I would love to have next to me, that's for sure ❤️

Clean-freak mothers, I get you 😤 really sweet but sometimes it can be a problem.

To her home??? Yooooo we attacking now, come on! You can do this ❤️

Nice chapter Vice (is it okay to call you like that? I give everyone nicks 😅). Keep it up! ❤️

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Aug 03, 2023

Hola amigo, cómo estás? I'll continue in English because of exactly what I wanted to tell you. You have a really nice start here, hope you keep it up, but you should consider changing title and synopsis to English too (my Ñ speaking mind read spanish and went 🧐?). Also, you are not intended to put chapter number in chapter name, that's automatic.

Apart from that, this is a really nice looking story, so if you have any questions about the contest don't doubt in asking. Have a nice day!

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Aug 03, 2023

I'm growing so attached to the story I can't just not click. You are doing wonders here, and this start already has me moved. While researching for my own festival I came across the Tanabata possibility so I learned. Altair and Vega find love again while coming together once in a year ❤️❤️❤️

And Toren gets his dance 😍 turn up the music!!! (Breaks speaker)
AND THEY SWITCHED, YAYYYY I LOVE THIS

And the fireworks, what a cute scene ❤️ Painting the sky is such a beautiful analogy, and I can see your art devotion has to do with the choosing of the words. Moreover, you seem to be preparing art for it, so it will surely be something to remember (and I'm eager to see it!)

Amazing chapter Mina, but I think I could easily skip this part as you always deliver a smile to my face, and you probably notice it 😅 keep it up!

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Aug 03, 2023

BRO KOTONE IS A MASTERMIND 🤯 she the kind of girl who has 170 IQ... 17... 17 THE SH- alright stop. But I love her, and how she gives us Ichika cute scenes 😤❤️

PIZZA GANG 😤😤😤 they get me bro, of course! Make it with extra cheese please 🍕

BARKING LIKE SJEUJWHSYW grandpa is alcoholic it seems 🧐 there's something with old man and drinks I swear 😤

Noooo Ichika 🥺 but now you have Pingin band-aid, we move 🫡

PFKFIEKJDEB 17 IS REAL AAAAAAA, YES THIS IS THE CONTENT I WANT IN MY VEINS 😤 AND THE MANDATORY MONOCLE, I have no words for this chapter hope you understand.

Amazing chapter Katsu, besides I'm being driven crazy, extremely cute and beautiful moments with the three of them. Keep it up! ❤️❤️❤️

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