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Shulox

Huracán, Argentina, Writing, in that order. Aiming to write the first latin-american novel in Japan.
If you smiled while reading my works, I won 😊
Find me on Instagram! @shuloxwrites

registered at: Jul 07, 2021

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Jul 21, 2023

What does the store owner say now?
"I need to speak with my niece, so I'll leave the store to ma son."
Alright this one was really bad I promise I'll stop (or not...)

Ohhh new message! What happens if I reply "Hi Crystal" to that number? I'll better not find out, but this is getting interesting. Keep it up Tom! ❤️

Can You Read Me?

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2023

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL THEY ARE A COUPLE I CAN'T, TAKE THIS, I WON 😍❤️

Noooo Hikaru you are the best boy she could have 😭 someone please hug him

And he went to save the relationship! This is probably my favourite chapter so far, I just loooove Rika and Hikaru. Thanks for writing Chibi, I need this happy ending for them ❤️

Ailurophobia

Chapter:15

Jul 21, 2023

My prediction was not correct? 😱 Damn Crystal was not so clear as I thought (STOP WITH THE BAD PUNS)

Nice chapter, I need to read more!

Can You Read Me?

Chapter:2

Jul 21, 2023

At least perform some drifting tricks to scare the shit out of him 😆

Nice chapter Mei! ❤️

Our History

Chapter:4

Jul 21, 2023

LMAO boxers time!

As recommendation, try not to just put many dialogue lines in the void, but try to construct more expressions. For example (not sure if you envisioned this): "Yes," she gently nodded with a calm expression, "It will be twenty..." I couldn't help but to feel certain admiration for her dedication.

Those are things that always come with a second revision, but just keep that in mind. Apart from that, nice chapter Mei! ❤️

Our History

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2023

Niceee, library encounter! I have the feeling Yan certainly found someone interesting here! I'm glad I could read you (bad pun sorry) on discord, I loved the introduction. Keep it up, Tomato! ❤️

Can You Read Me?

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2023

To:hmt5u

I'll probably continue Grimgar as well, story looked interesting (even if I got emotionally killed by the first death)

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2023

Lineup cards and derby matches. Ah, just the things I need every morning. Nice one Christian! ❤️

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:23

Jul 21, 2023

To:hmt5u

Ohhhh, you live in Japan? Then hope you like the ambience, pretty sure there are no Obon festivals with football and fireworks, but Takachiho is a special place 😆
Thanks for reading! ❤️

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2023

To:hmt5u

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! ❤️

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:0

Jul 21, 2023

To:Memo Alfonso

No need to thank, here we learn new things everyday. Both things also happened to me last year, luckily some kind people told me to correct them just on time. Anything you need, you know where to find me!

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:8

Jul 21, 2023

To:Zauru

Bocchi would disagree with you, if she can overcome her anxiety and speak 😆
But I'll tell Hiroshi to try the mackerel, looks tasty!
Thanks for reading Cesar! ❤️

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:6

Jul 21, 2023

To:hmt5u

I've seen the anime, which I liked a lot. It just felt different to the rest, showing real struggles and fears. To some degree, it also inspired me to write Comeback too. So if this will be something Grimgarish, I can't wait to see more!

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:1

Jul 20, 2023

A normal day in Robin's life: He gets up, he gets called pervert, he say "I'm screwed," he goes to sleep. Nice routine 😆

Heads up boy! If you are participating in the contest, you should not use anything copyright-protected. So that certain character on Andrea's cap... you should probably do something about it. Besides that, nice chapter Memo! Keep it up! ❤️

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:8

Jul 20, 2023

Andrea! Of course he was talking about McBurger Jrs, what else? 🤭

Come on, Leonel! Fight! I still have my doubts about Santos, but we shall find out soon! Another great chapter Memo!

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:7

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