Jul 11, 2023
To:minatika
Alright first of all, thanks for your unbelievable response. It's a lot more than I could ask, and I truly admire your willing to help someone when they need advice. So, again, really thanks ❤️
I'll start with the last things, since I'm a bad boy 😆 you have a great point on friendship there. Honestly I'm the first one in liking all those cute moments (I put a lot of them in my previous entry) so I'm glad you noticed the lack of it. My problem is the word limit. I still have so many to do and already in 40k words (I'll have to simplify many things from past chapters). Remember the festival? I there simplified some things I would have really liked to develop (like I said Nao liked drawing and going for walks and some facts about Takashi and football but really quick). There's a kinda cute scene incoming where we can see some of Nao's hobbies (not friendship-style, sorry) but I'll try to add that in case my word limit allows it. I would really like to, so I promise I'll try 😊
Then I see you kinda generally like the fear development and how the pacing feels so I'm really glad about it. I think I'm doing much better than last year in terms of that, so I guess it's great for learning. And yes, of course they are physically attracted (I try to add a She's beautiful every time I can 🤭), but as they are teenagers I thought it would be normal. Japanese can be somewhat closed regarding that, but the flame of youth is always there 🔥
And about the speed of the start of their relationship, I fully understand what you say and you partially found the reason. With all the necesarry sports, it needs to go a little quicky, but if I have word limit gap I'll change that. But there's the other thing you couldn't guess, and don't worry, it's normal. But as why she feels so comfortable with Takashi and not the rest... just wait for some more chapters, I promise everything will make sense. You probably sometimes see things that are not coherent or seem unimportant, but I promise they are not. So just hang on for a little more and you'll see 👀
But again, I can't even know how to thank you. First the support, then the art and now this, I don't know what can I do to give something back. You are truly very sweet, and I see the same with everyone here. So if you ever need something, never doubt on messaging me, you know where to find me. Hope to see you around for more (and hopefully more friendship) ❤️
